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Proud to Present... Bruce's Big Move by Author/Illustrator Ryan T. Higgins

9/25/2017

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The bear is back, but he's moving out. You remember Bruce, right? He's hard to forget. He's large, hairy, and against his initial instincts, motherly, too. When we first met him, he revealed himself as a grump....NOT liking much of anything. But as in most picture books, Bruce transforms. From a crabby, selfish bear who loved to cook for himself to a busy, messy mom who adopts four goslings. After a nice vacation in Miami and a chaotic return home to a trio of mice that won't leave, Bruce is back for a third book.
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Or should I say that he's not really back because he is leaving? You may have been there and done that. Sometimes guests just won't leave or they show up uninvited. What's a bear to do? After living in a messy, noisy, crowded household with three mice that don't understand that it's time to skedattle, Bruce packs up his goslings and decides to move. But you remember what happened in the first book, right?  That little transformation Bruce goes through? I'm just sayin'... Well actually, I'm not saying anything. You'll just have to see what happens for yourself.

But I will say this, the third book in this series has just as much charm, heart, and feeling as the last two. It's adventurous and animated, with deep hues of color that transcend Bruce's mood and demeanor, while revealing lots of action and scenery. The characters are so much fun that I feel like I could watch them in a TV series. As a mom, I relate to Bruce. Even though my kids are teens now, the messes never stop. Instead of toys, it's clothes and shoes and papers all over the place. As soon as I wipe chunky fingerprints off the refrigerator handle, they are back as soon as I turn around. To have a parent relate to the conflict is a plus, but will the kids relate? With mischievous little mice who love to play and make us laugh, that's a resounding yes. They create newspaper/cardboard castles and whoops...draw pictures on the wall! They even get the geese to snorkel and have upbeat, positive spirits that see the best in every situation. 

In a few words, this is a super fun read. Writers will find a traditional story arc modeled, with a clear problem and three failed attempts to get rid of it. A fourth escalating attempt to resolve the crisis works, but has an unexpected layered problem and a surprise thrown in at the end. Additional mentor text shout-outs go to... (drum roll, please)
...Great page turns! Especially after Bruce meets his neighbors. When you think everything will work out and it starts to go in another direction, great page turns are the result.
...Emotion! The grumpiness, the sarcastic expressions, and unexpected loneliness are driving forces that give this story heart.
...Art surprises! You MUST look under the jacket! Expression that will make you laugh out loud and a license plate that could very easily be mine.
...End papers! I love that we get to have the directions for frying-pan ball (By Nibbs) and a recipe for Grammie Tootie's Applesauce.

A home can be chaotic. A home can be messy. A home can be noisy. But a home is home.

What are some wanna-forget-em-but-gotta-have-em features about your home? Or how about other mentor texts that feature chaotic settings?

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Proud to Present... It's NOT Jack and the Beanstalk by Author Josh Funk

9/18/2017

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As writers, we know that every story starts out as a manuscript. I was lucky enough to read It's NOT Jack and the Beanstalk in draft form. It had "publish me" written all over it! After receiving the hard-cover finished product, I love it even more. In fact, I have a new humorous favorite. 

Jack is a boy who is not afraid to speak what's on his mind. When the narrator's directions begin to lead him in directions he does not want to go, he stands strong and offers his honest advice (and ear for rhyme) to a giant in need. As it turns out, Jack is not the only one who doesn't like to be pushed in undesirable directions. And as all fairy tales seem to go, happy endings make the best of all.

In a traditional story, a narrator usually doesn't interact with other characters. But author Josh Funk adds a unique metafiction spin when he plays with the story's structure. Jack and the narrator don't just communicate, they even disagree. It gets downright bossy at times and Jack is fully aware that he is in a story. I must disagree with Jack when he says, "This story keeps getting worse and worse." For readers, it just keeps getting better and better. Reader code for worse and worse is of course, tension, drama, and conflict. Yes! We crave it! We must have it! Without it, the story would be boring. There will be none of that in this story which begs to be read a loud. Step into character and be ready to perform. It's your chance to use two distinct main character voices... (Personally, I use an British announcer-ish voice (think Robin Leach) for the narrator and a pronounced nasal-ish tone for Jack. Oh, and a low moo voice for Bessy the Cow, a dreamy voice for Cinderella, and a booming voice for the Giant.)

Paired with Edwardian Taylor's animated illustration style and lots of dialogue between characters, It's NOT Jack and the Beanstalk appeals to the reader just as a humorous video or television program would. And in this age of electronics and technology, it ought to earn high points with kids. Reaching the child reader's interest level is the key to transforming them into lifelong readers. Author Josh Funk has the formula and It's NOT Hansel and Gretal is coming in 2019!

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Check out some of Josh's other books, too! They are great mentor texts for rhyme, voice, and unique concept!
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    Carrie Charley Brown

    As a children’s writer, and a teacher, my goal is to help you carry on.  Sometimes learning is challenging, so why go it alone?  Your journey will be more meaningful and comfortable with friends to share it with. Together, we'll get up close and personal with authors, illustrators, and the best of picture books.  If we work together, great things will follow! 

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