I have a few tasks for you today. Take a look at the season(s) represented in your work in progress. Are you reflecting all that the season has to offer? Is the season appealing to all of your senses? How does it affect the mood of your characters? For example, the winters up north bring bitter cold and snow on the ground about six months out of the year. During that period, Mr. Sun doesn't come out to play much. When I lived there, it had a huge impact on my mood and put me into a mini depression. Allow the season in your WIP to affect your character's mood and make sure that you are consistent with the climate as your scenes change. If you do not yet have a WIP, consider the seasons as you begin to write.
I love everything about fall. I was raised in Iowa where the cool days came early and the leaves turned gorgeous shades of red, yellow, orange, and brown. There is just one problem: I live in Texas now. We don't get much of a fall season here. So, yes, I am homesick for my favorite season!
I have a few tasks for you today. Take a look at the season(s) represented in your work in progress. Are you reflecting all that the season has to offer? Is the season appealing to all of your senses? How does it affect the mood of your characters? For example, the winters up north bring bitter cold and snow on the ground about six months out of the year. During that period, Mr. Sun doesn't come out to play much. When I lived there, it had a huge impact on my mood and put me into a mini depression. Allow the season in your WIP to affect your character's mood and make sure that you are consistent with the climate as your scenes change. If you do not yet have a WIP, consider the seasons as you begin to write.
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Messes. It seems they are everywhere. In my office, my bedroom, my classroom...I can't escape them! It is the result of being too busy. For a Type-A person, this is extremely frustrating to the point of breaking. Seriously, I try not to look at the piles to spare my sanity while running from one thing to the next!
For today's storm short, I would like you to start looking at the personality types of your characters. Have you studied the different types? There are a plethora of different personality sites and tests on the Internet that you can use for free. For today's task, get inside your main character's head by taking a free personality test. Answer all of the questions as he/she would think, do, and react. Allow this to guide your character research and revisions. My hope is that this little character cleanup will provide consistency and believability for your story. Tension. Without it, our stories stall out and make readers loose interest. There is nothing worse than a real snoozer! So, let's build some tension! I will give you three problem scenarios. Your job is to find 3 attempts that will fail for your character. As in real life, things don't always work on the first try. Therefore, attempts should not measure up to a solution right away. Here are your scenarios (courtesy of my oldest son, Collin):
-A guy gets turned into a monster against his will -The fate of the world is to be destroyed -MC's house swallows him whole Can you tell my son likes sci-fi and fantasy? Have fun! After super-charging my idea bank with PiBoIdMo last November, I received a recommendation for an online picture book community called 12x12. The ring-leader of it all, Julie Hedlund, welcomed me and 500 others! Since joining 12x12 in January, I have written 24 manuscripts, with 12 x 12 and other competitions fueling my fire. Therefore, I am forever grateful for the community Julie has started. I am so pumped to be welcoming Julie as our Mystery Author this month! Not only has she published two picture book apps, but she is now welcoming one of them into print format this month! She does so much for others and now I am honored to be showcasing her work! Welcome, Julie! Congratulations on your debut picture book, A Troop is a Group of Monkeys, illustrated by Pamela Baron! I love the educational quality of your book and app. Kids love animals! The app is also super fun with the playful music composed by Tim McCanna. What inspired you to write about this topic? First of all, thank you for that amazing introduction Carrie! I'm blushing. I'm so happy to be here. Thanks for inviting me! I came across a list of collective nouns for animals on the Internet one day and I was surprised by how few I knew. But even better than that was how clever they were! They all described the animal in some way (a "tower" of giraffes, a "caravan" of camels). Since all kids love animals, I immediately saw this as an opportunity to teach them a few facts and sophisticated vocabulary words, all while making it fun. Plus, I have yet to meet an adult who doesn't love learning the group names, too. What was it like to start out by publishing an app before the print version? It was exhilarating because I knew this story would work well as an app, and that interactivity would really make the animals come to "life." So in this case, it made sense to publish the app first. Plus, it's much more difficult to publish an app, so the print version seemed easy afterward! (Although Stacey, my publisher at Little Bahalia might feel differently.) Pamela Baron’s illustrations are playful and realistic. Were you able to communicate with her during the editing stages? Tell us about the process of editing an app vs. editing a book? I love how you picked up on the fact that Pamela's illustrations are both kid-friendly and yet are not overly anthropomorphized. It is a nonfiction book after all. Pamela's gorgeous watercolors walk that line so well. I didn't communicate with Pamela at all during the illustration and production of the app. That was the publisher's job - much the same as traditional print publishing. However, I did collaborate a great deal with Stacey on the marketing and promotion of TROOP, and she shared many illustrations and her ideas for interactivity as we went along, which was SO fun! Once it was accepted for publication, how long did this project take? What was the most surprising part of this process? And… were there many differences between the publishing experience of the book vs. the app? One of the best things about publishing digitally is how fast it is compared to traditional print publishing (assuming you have a talented creative/art director like Little Bahalia does!). The manuscript was acquired in June, 2012 and the app was published in February, 2013. And the second app, A Shiver of Sharks, was published in June. So I became a twice-published author in the span of a year! With the print book, I'd say the biggest difference is the lack of control and the WAITING! So much of the process is outside of our direct control. The printer has to finish the books and get them on the boat, Ingram needs to add the ISBN to its database so bookstores can order them, Amazon has to put it up for preorder, etc. That was difficult for me after the relative freedom and speed of publishing the apps. Was A Troop is a Group of Monkeys the first manuscript you circulated into submission as a picture book writer? If not, how long have you actively been submitting work as a children’s writer? Actually, TROOP was the first manuscript I submitted when I was first starting out. After it got rejected a few times, I put it aside and worked on other manuscripts. Then when apps came around, the proverbial lightbulb went off and I knew the interactivity inherent in apps could set it apart. So it's been about four years since I first started submitting, and I got published in my third year. What do you feel was the most important thing you did that lead to publication? Writing and not giving up. Seriously, anyone who is willing to keep writing, keep learning, keep improving and refuses to give up will get there eventually. Tell us about your other published projects. What else can we look forward to in the future? Well, if you come to my blog in two weeks, I'll be announcing a new picture book that will be published in 2014 using a "hybrid" publishing model. But I can't reveal the details yet. Sorry! Also, my agent has submitted one of my manuscripts to an interested editor, so we'll see. Keep your fingers and toes crossed for me! You are so helpful to others through 12x 12. Please tell us more about why you started this community and when writers can register again. I started 12 x 12 initially to motivate MYSELF to write more, but as is often the case when you include others, the joy of creating a community for fellow picture book writers has been even more rewarding than the personal incentive to get more writing done. The members of 12 x 12 are the BEST people in the writing universe. Period!! :-) It never ceases to amaze me how much 12xers share and support each other. We are all better writers as a result! So I hope even more picture book writers will join us next year. Registration is open in January and February, and folks can sign up here to make sure they're notified when registration opens. Thank you for being with us today, Julie! You are an amazing inspiration to others, and I know you will continue your plight to motivate others and publish amazing picture books of our own. Thank YOU Carrie! It's my honor to be here and to have you in the 12 x 12 group! To find out more about my personal testimony for 12x12, you will find my guest post on Julie’s blog and more on my blog site. Happy travels on your writing journey!!! Julie Hedlund is a Children's author, founder of the 12 x 12 Picture Book Challenge a monthly contributor to the Brain Burps about Books podcast and the "Field Guide to 21st Century Publishing" for the Children's Book Insider. Doesn't winning feel great? In the case of last week's contest, it only took one comment to be a winner! Thank you to Kirsti Call for commenting on last week's Storm! Kirsti is the winner of Debbie Dadey's newest volume of Mermaid Tales: The Secret Sea Horse. To celebrate with Kirsti, let's make this week's writing prompt a real winner: Think back to a time when you... A. Won something B. Almost won something C. Lost something, but gained something in return As writers, we tend to "lose" a lot. This profession wears a heavy rejection necklace. After a while, that chain can make us stronger and help us reach our publication goals. When you receive your next rejection, you may also gain some helpful comments from agents or editors. Don't give up! Keep on writing! You will never know what could have been if you stop after the first few rejections. Challenge yourself to at least visit your Saturday Storm prompt each week and release your creativity. I have a special treat for you. Your October Mystery Author will be featured one day early this month! Be sure to stop back on Monday to receive some inspiration! |
Carrie Charley Brown
As a children’s writer, and a teacher, my goal is to help you carry on. Sometimes learning is challenging, so why go it alone? Your journey will be more meaningful and comfortable with friends to share it with. Together, we'll get up close and personal with authors, illustrators, and the best of picture books. If we work together, great things will follow! Archives
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