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A Librarian is Born, Plus 2 Mentor Texts

7/3/2017

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By Carrie Charley Brown

Hopefully, the teachers among us have been able to enjoy their summers a little bit. I've spent many summers immersed in professional development and classroom preparation, but this summer is beyond my normal prep. Despite my elementary education degree, Texas teaching certifications, and years of experience, I must earn renewal rights for my Kentucky teaching certificate by receiving a Masters degree.

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I'm not gonna lie...This was not part of my original plan. With three teenagers in the house, the next college student that I expected to support was my soon to be senior. But life has a way of dealing us things that we did not expect to find in the cards. Given my passion for books and writing, I decided to parlay this into my teaching requirement. Yes, I will be a librarian when I grow up. ('Cuz we never really grow up, right?) I've completed one course already and start the next one today.

Since you follow me, you know that I research mentor texts. One of the ways that I stay connected to the research behind children's books is to review them. I love a good tale that allows my imagination to take its fictional ride.
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You'll find that here for sure. Who doesn't love a problem that grows beyond control?

The Teacher's Pet appears to be like all the other students' tadpoles in the class. But if you look closely at Zachariah OHora's illustrations, you'll see that Mr. Stricter's pet is slightly different than the rest. Then, hold onto your hat because... Mr. Stricter's pet is not a tadpole at all. In fact, it's rather large and gray and he eats a lot, too. (Sometimes he eats unexpected things.) Don't get too close. Consider yourself warned. When a teacher is in love with something, you know it's not easy to give up. And this teacher loves this book. It's fiction at its best; meant to entertain. Kids live for this stuff.

And they also like gum. Lots and lots of gum. So when the Gumazing Gum Girl shows up with a villain on her heels...dun, dun, dun! You'd better watch out! Especially if you only have one piece of gum left in your pocket. Gabby Gomez is in a bit of a predicament. With her secret identity as Gum Girl, people are depending on her to keep them safe. But gum has a way of leaving it's mark on a certain evil villain's dashed dreams and also on Gabby's teeth. When your dad's a dentist that might not go so well. Gabby pays attention to her inner voice when it tells her to be honest about her gum-chewing ways. She wants to do the right thing, but will they understand and will it cost her the chance to save her town?  As Gabby struggles between her duty and everyday life, she hopes her bubble won't burst. My first graders flipped for this one, and heartily joined in at every "dun, dun, dun!" They couldn't wait to get their hands on a gum-scented version and read it for themselves. Now that it's out in the world, you can get your hands on it, too. Just watch out for the sticky gum.

I think you'll enjoy checking these two out for yourself.

The opinions in this post reflect my honest opinion as both an educator and a writer. Thanks to Disney-Hyperion for providing advanced reader copies of these books!

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Recounting Cold Turkey

12/3/2016

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Something peculiar happened to me this past May. My writing spark flickered and nearly fizzled out. An emptiness took over the place in my heart that used to sing every time my hands hit the computer keyboard.

I didn't know it at the time, but it was a warning for me. Not just to slow down... no. I had passed that yellow flag long before. Now it was time to stop. And I did. Cold turkey. No writing. No submissions.

I picked up my family and rejoined the elementary teaching ranks clear across the country. Moving to a new state with three children was all encompassing; no time to think about writing at all. And a funny thing happened as twenty-four little first graders surrounded my suppression. My passion for teaching and children just kind of took over. I reinvested myself in these 6-year old sponges, who soak up everything they encounter.

And then after about 3 months, ideas began to flicker. Not fast and furious like they once had. But at least they were still there. And that's all that mattered. I wrote a crappy picture book draft and broke through the rust on my brain. It's not completely gone yet, but I'm okay with not killing myself over too many writing activities. That's a big thing for a work-a-holic.

As one who has always preached, "Immerse yourself in the writing world," I hope you still will. But, please do it with lots and lots of breaks.

Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) is just around the corner, and yes, I am still alive and kicking. I'm quite excited about this research movement I founded three years ago. We moved into our new blog home last April and have since expanded the family. Together with Kirsti Call, Janie Reinart, and Keila Dawson, we will usher in ReFoReMo 2017 when we announce our author-educator team in January. Registration will open February 15, as usual, and the challenge will begin on February 27 this year.  And that's no cold turkey.
 
If you haven’t joined us in our new blog home yet, you will find the challenge at http://www.reforemo.com. It’s good to be back!
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Striving for Balance

5/30/2016

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Achieving balance is never easy and I think to some degree it is “normal” to be off-balance. We just have to watch how far our scales tip to one side. That’s where the danger lies. In last month’s post I admitted that I was “Breaking the Code” in order to tip my scale back in the other direction. When your muscles are used to something for a very long time, they resist new routines. For example, I have poor posture, and therefore, my muscles are exhausted when I attempt to hold my shoulders in a “normal” way.  The muscles must be retrained to accept the new way.
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Retraining a brain to think in alternate ways is similar. My inner doubter has been challenging me in ways I’d love to shake off immediately. But it takes time. Even though I know perfection is impossible, my drive keeps convincing me that I need to give more. Do more. Be more. Strive for perfection, or a better version of who I am. But, as noted in last month’s post, I am setting my foot down. I’m starting to tell myself no. Even though I could push myself to give another ounce or pint or gallon, I am asking myself, “What is this costing you?” The answer may be “sleep” or “family connections” or “a personal break,” all crucial things to staying healthy and happy. And human.

Yes, our own happiness matters in big ways. So, how about we set our schedules? I am guilty of feeling like I need to respond to people right away when they need help. Whether by email or social media or a phone call, I feel the need to be there. As I start to set boundaries, I implemented a business policy a few months back that is helping a little, but I’d also like to curb my need to respond to others right away.  I am also working to prioritize family, limit screen time, stick to business & volunteer hours and schedule my own writing time.
 
Of course, sometimes a schedule has to be rearranged to respect others involved. And then there is the upheaval of a schedule when school is out for summer. Yikes! Almost time! I will do my best to respect my wishes.
How will you respect your wishes?

 
If we check in with one another at least once a month, then maybe we’ll take the time to try to grow toward our goals before next month, right?

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Carrie On... Breaking the Code

4/29/2016

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Oh my goodness! It feels good to be back! Now, I know some of your are thinking, “Carrie, we just heard from you like a gazillion times during ReFoReMo!” True, true. But I haven’t been back to this Carrie On…Together blog since the end of 2015. ReFoReMo kept me pretty busy!
 
As I refocus my goals, I’ll offer one bonus post per month here on the Carrie On… blog to help us achieve balance (or at least get closer to it!) If you are looking for the new ReFoReMo home, you’ll find it at www.reforemo.com. But I figured as wrapped up as we get in the many varied craft building opportunities that are out there, we certainly shouldn’t forget about life in general, right? So, let’s get on with it!

Breaking the Code

When it comes to new opportunities and working with people, I’ve held myself accountable to a pretty strict code for as long as I can remember. It equates to just a few words:
"Be accountable, dependable, dedicated, helpful, hard working, and available. Go above and beyond."
Some of this dates back to the dawn of my teaching career, where so much of what I did was in the public eye. All the time. Even at the grocery store or while out with my husband… There were my students and their parents. And my code pounded through my mind.
"Be accountable, dependable, dedicated, helpful, hard-working, and available. Go above and beyond."
One word was missing from my code: Human.  A human is flawed. A human makes mistakes. A human has a regular life, too.  Because I had not accepted this into my code, I attempted to live the life of a super human, or in other words, a work-a-holic. While I still want to give 200% on every task, I am just now realizing that I can’t always do that, and everyone will be just fine if I only give 100%. (Or maybe even 75% every now and then.) 
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So, why am I telling you this? Well, besides the fact that I always wear my feelings on my sleeve, I have committed to change, and I hope you’ll consider it, too. I’m focusing on a word that is helping me breathe: boundaries. Because of my code, I’ve had a hard time stopping when something isn’t finished. Which means, I stay up way too late.
I found myself an accountability partner who struggles with the same issue. When 10:30 rolls around, I am supposed to be in bed, with no screens until 7 am. Without sleep, who can function? In the morning, my partner and I send an emoji to show our results.  And of course, provide support when the going gets tough. I’m happy to say that I am making progress. Instead of 1:00 or 2:00 am bedtimes, I am getting better at heeding my need for rest. Perhaps an accountability partner might help you with a personal goal, too? Without taking care of ourselves, it is hard to make headway with our creative goals. Step by step, I am evaluating where I need to set better boundaries.
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If you’re already great at setting boundaries, please share your ideas. Or if you are just starting to exercise them, tell me:
 
Where would you like to draw boundaries? What are you doing to uphold them?
I’d also love to hear your code. What words drive you?

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Writing Goals 2016

12/14/2015

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Just in case you missed last week's announcement, I wanted to let you know that the Carrie On... Together blog will be taking a break for a while. My professional time will be split between my own writing, ReFoReMo 2016, the Regional Advisor position for SCBWI North Texas, serving KidLit clients with professional critiques, video production, and social media marketing, and yes, still be a mom to three busy kiddos. You will also find me blogging year round on Writer's Rumpus, The Institute of Children's Literature, and ReFoReMo (this site), of course. I will eventually return to the Carrie On... Together! blog, as well, when the time is right. If I don't see you during  ReFoReMo, then maybe I'll catch you over at 12 x 12, ReviMo, NaPiBoWriWee, KidLit Summer School or PiBoIdMo...all of which I just can't give up! (They motivate and help me produce!) 

Lots of exciting announcements are on the way as we prepare for Reading for Research Month 2016! We'll reveal the calendar of challenge presenters on January 5. See you there!

What are your writing goals for 2016?

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December Author #2: THINK QUICK with Laura Murray and The Gingerbread Man Loose at Christmas

12/7/2015

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I am pleased to present our second author interview of the month, and our final post in December. Please join me in welcoming author Laura Murray!

Hi Laura! Congrats on the release of THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE AT CHRISTMAS. I love the themes of respect and giving that run throughout this story.  All of the THINK QUICK themes below appear in your book.  Let’s see which way you lean.  Remember, THINK QUICK!

On Giving:
Homemade Presents or Store Bought?

 
Homemade presents!

I have found through the years that the most meaningful gifts I personally have received are notes, crafts, and things that my students, their parents, my own children and family, and friends have written or made. I value these gifts because they are personal, thoughtful, and they also represent a gift of “time to create” on the giver’s part.  My children and I also love to give homemade gifts, especially around the holidays, and especially as a surprise to folks who don’t expect them – like our postal carrier, our trash collectors, our check- out person at the grocery, etc. – their surprised faces make our day too!  I think I leaned on this theme in The Gingerbread Man Loose at Christmas, because my children discovered that giving these type of simple gifts made them just as happy as the receiver – it is so much fun!
 

On Small Acts of Kindness:
Start young or wait?

 
Start young, but you’re never too old to start!

 
On Creating with Children:
More glitter or less?

 
More glitter! 

Sparkly creations are just fun. A mess is often the sign of a good time, and also a sign of curiosity and creativity.  And the children can have just as much fun cleaning up, if it’s made into a game.


On Catching the Gingerbread Man:
Make him a friend or eat him all up?

 
I have to admit that I love a warm Gingerbread Man cookie with icing. But it always bothered me as a child that the Gingerbread Man character in the original story gets eaten by a fox at the end (even though the original GB Man is a bit sassy.) So when I decided to write the first book in the GB Man series, The Gingerbread Man Loose at School, I decided to change things up a bit, starting with my GB Man’s personality and the ending.So I think I’d choose – make him a friend.

 
On Snow:
Love it or leave it?

 
Snow with kids is fun! So if my kids and I can stay home and enjoy it – love it! My feet don’t get mushy like the Gingerbread Man’s but they do get crazy cold, so when we lived in Canada for a little while, I had to get very good boots.


On Christmas:
Old traditions or new ones?

 
Both, absolutely! I love to carry on old traditions from when I was a kid, but I love to start new ones with my own children too. My mom gave me an ornament each year when I was growing up so that I would have several personal ornaments with memories attached when I moved out and started putting up my own Christmas tree. I have carried on this tradition with my own kids. One of our new traditions involves the surprise homemade gifts I mentioned in the first paragraph – we love it because it helps our children to think about others who may not get appreciation or thanks for all that they do for us. And it can be as simple as a card or a compliment – try it and just watch the faces of those you surprise!
 
On Kissing a Cookie:
Just a small peck or grab a bite while you can?

 
Hmmm… if it’s a cookie we bake – and who doesn’t jump off the pan – then a bite is irresistible! If it’s a cookie that decides to tell a story – then a sweet smooch would be in order.

 
On Teaching Gratitude:
Work Together or make it personal?

 
For young children, it is always fun to work on ideas in a group. But the more specific and personal we make a gift, the more meaningful it can be. For instance, a compliment or note to a teacher telling them what your child loves about their teaching/classroom, or how they have helped your child to grow, is SO wonderful!I still have notes from parents and students like this, which I kept over the years because they meant so much to me.

 
On Fractured Fairy Tales:
Keep some things consistent or change it all up?

 
Both – Keep some things consistent so they are familiar to readers. And then ask “What if…’this’ happened instead?” to change things up and make the story fresh.


On Books:
The Gingerbread Man Loose at Christmas or The Gingerbread Man Loose at Christmas?

 
Since I seem to lean towards the “both” answer a lot in the above questions, I think I’ll just keep my streak going and say… both!

Thanks for THINKing QUICK with us, Laura! Penguin Books for Young Readers is offering a giveaway of The Gingerbread Man Loose at Christmas along with a whole batch of cookie related books! To enter, visit HERE.

Click HERE for a review of THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE AT CHRISTMAS.
(Review by Carrie Charley Brown)

From our homes to yours, we hope you enjoy this holiday season. The Carrie On...Together blog will have limited posts for a while to allow enough time for Reading for Research Month (ReFoReMo) preparation.  The THINK QUICK interview will find a new home on the ReFoReMo blog in April, and you'll always find tons of helpful picture book posts there, as well. We invite you to participate in the second annual ReFoReMo challenge in March. Registration opens February 15. If you are subscribed to the newsletter in the sidebar, you'll receive all of the updates for the challenge. For more information on the challenge, visit the ReFoReMo page and utilize the drop down menu for more details.
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Laura Murray was a teacher before becoming an author. She’s had fun trying to find many an escaped Gingerbread Man in her time. She is the author of THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE IN THE SCHOOL, and the Gingerbread Man's continuing school adventures - THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE ON THE FIRE TRUCK, THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE AT CHRISTMAS, and THE GINGERBREAD MAN LOOSE AT THE ZOO (2016). 

Laura lives with her family in northern Virginia. Visit her on Twitter at @LauraMurrayBook or www.LauraMurrayBooks.com for loads of fun activities and lessons, standards-linked teacher's guides, as well as information on school author presentations.

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December Mystery Author #1: Kristen Remenar

12/1/2015

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Each December, I give the double bonus gift of featuring TWO Mystery Authors before the blogs officially go on a holiday break. The first of these is a super-librarian, national speaker, and children's writer that I had the honor of getting to know through the CYBILS fiction picture book panel in 2014. Kris Remenar loves books. No, I mean she really, really loves books! I know that most of us do, too, but Kris is like a literary super woman. (I mean, just look at this picture! Super hero, right?)
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She even writes books about how to use books in the classroom...a mentor text lover to the core! Part One of her interview follows, and you won't want to miss Part Two which covers mentor texts. Happy Book Birthday to Kris and Ground Hog's Dilemma! Today is the special day!

How did it feel to hold your debut picture book for the first time?


I felt a bit like a Russian nesting doll, and all the younger versions of me, the eight-year-old me, the twelve-year-old me, the thirty-three-year-old who sent out her first submission, etc., were all present and so happy to finally hold this book. 
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I understand that lots of revision helped you turn your dream into a reality. Do you have any words of advice on patience or revision?

The first time I shared a manuscript with a group for a critique, I was so naïve, and I was offended when a member suggested major revision, as if he’d just called my baby ugly! I’d love to think my stories will spring from my forehead perfectly formed, but the truth is my writing benefits from thoughtful revision, so I’ve learned not to take suggestions as attacks on my character and see them as tools to improve the piece at hand.
 
What do you feel is the secret to finding your voice as a writer? When did you realize that you had “found” yours?

The secret to finding your voice as a writer is this: be willing to write an incredible amount of mediocre work at the beginning, looking for those sentences or paragraphs that shine upon re-reading, and eventually you’ll write something that you can reread six months later and not cringe.  I have a filing cabinet full of decent manuscripts, but my writing became much better when I let my own sense of humor in and stopped thinking about what would sell.
 
How has your experience as a librarian contributed to your writing?

I get to read picture books for a living! When I read a book to kids, I can automatically see what works. When a book entrances an audience, or when half of the kids are fidgeting as I read, I take mental notes on those pages and study them later.

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Do you think visually when you write? Or does having a talented illustrator husband, the amazing Matt Faulkner, encourage you to think visually even more?

Living with an artist has definitely helped me think in pictures! He doodles constantly, and every little character he draws seems to have its own story – there are no stock or background characters. I’ve learned to imagine each character in my writing much more fully, and I’ve learned that long chunks of dialogue with no action in a picture book lead to illustrations of talking heads.
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What do you feel is the single most important factor of an agent/client relationship?
I’m represented by Fuse Literary Agency: Gordon Warnock handles my adult writing and Sara Sciuto does the youth market. The most important factor of our relationship is the knowledge that we’re all working as hard as we can to sell my writing. My agents know the market, so when Sara suggests how to make a story stronger, I listen. I work to give the best manuscripts I can and I know that my agents will do all they can to sell them.

And there is MORE! Kris shares her experience and viewpoint about picture books as mentor texts in Part 2 of the interview HERE!

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Kristen Remenar is an author, children’s librarian, and national speaker on early literacy. Her first picture book is GROUNDHOG’S DILEMMA, published by Charlesbridge, and is illustrated by the award-winning author/artist (and super-cute husband), Matt Faulkner. Her alter ego, Helen Wrath, has a book out on December 29 (just in time to deal with your post-holiday stress disorder) called DRAW WITH A VENGEANCE: GET EVEN IN INK AND LET KARMA HANDLE THE REST.

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Our Apologies for Tech Issues

11/18/2015

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As we strive to optimize our systems for both the Carrie On... Together and ReFoReMo blogs, we went through a few tech glitches over this past month. We would like to apologize if you received multiple post email notifications. That is exactly why we are working to provide a more reliable system. Thank you for your patience as we fine tune everything.

Our THINK QUICK author post did not arrive in your inbox this week. You won't want to miss this QUICK glance into authorstrator Mark Pett's world HERE.  We are gearing up for ReFoReMo 2016 and you will continue to receive regularly scheduled posts through the end of the year. After that time, we'll shift our focus back to the upcoming challenge for a brief period before resuming our April-December post schedule. We have an amazing author-educator faculty lined up and the content will not disappoint. Thank you for being part of our community!

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November THINK QUICK with Authorstrator Mark Pett

11/17/2015

 
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Hi Mark! Congrats on the release of LIZARD IN THE PARK.  I love the imagination that is poured into this book and the deep thoughts we are left with at the end.  All of the THINK QUICK themes below appear in your book.  Let’s see which way you lean.  Remember, THINK QUICK!
 
On Lizards (the real big ones):

Long time love or relatable passion?
Long time love. I grew up in the Mountain West and loved encountering lizards on walks through the foothills. They harken back to another time — their look, their feel, their cold-bloodedness!
 
On Attachments:
Teddy Bear or strange object?
Strange object. When I was young, I loved exploring and finding strange treasures. I suppose I still do.
 
On Parks:
Visit often or once in a while?
Visit often. I have two young daughters and we have several favorite parks. Personally, I much prefer a park to a backyard.
 
On Curiosity:

Hands-on exploration or read about it?
Hands-on exploration. I resort to reading about things only when I’ve exhausted what I can learn handling and manipulating and exploring.
 
On Nature:

Finders keepers or observe?
Finders keepers. This is tricky, since observing nature is a way of keeping it as well!
 
On Childhood Treasures:

In a box or on display?
On display. When I found treasures as a boy, I wanted it out where I could enjoy it!
 
On Thanksgiving Day Parades:
Yearly tradition or catch sporadically?
Catch sporadically. It’s a fun tradition, but one I partake in only rarely.
 
Attend live or watch on TV?
Watch on TV. I’ve yet to experience it in person! Perhaps I’ll add that to my bucket list.
 
On Play:
Live in the moment or live in your imagination?
Live in your imagination. I was a daydreamer and chronic imaginer. When I was a child, I constantly lost myself in fantasy. Whole days disappeared.
 
On Books:
Lizard from the Park or Lizard from the Park?
Lizard from the Park! I’m quite proud of this book and thrilled to see it out in the world!
 
Thanks for THINKing QUICK with us!

Click HERE for a review of Lizard From the Park
(Review by Carrie Charley Brown)

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Writer and illustrator Mark Pett makes books. He is the “authorstrator” of Lizard From the Park, The Boy and the Airplane, The Girl and the Bicycle, and The Girl Who Never Made Mistakes. Before books, he created the syndicated comic strips Mr. Lowe and Lucky Cow. Mark lives in the Mountain West.

November Mystery Author: Jodi Moore Moves In...AGAIN!

11/9/2015

 
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Having a positive attitude and spreading good vibes throughout the kidlit community is something author Jodi Moore knows a lot about. From our first interactions through various online kidlit groups, it seemed that Jodi was permanently surrounded by a circle of sunlight... and hearts. She is THAT sweet and so are her books! I am sure most of you already know and love WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN, which captures the wonder, play, and imagination of childhood. But, what do you do WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN...AGAIN? You welcome him, and his trusty author companion, to be the October Mystery Author! Thanks so much for shining your light here, Jodi!

Thank you for hosting me and my Dragon on your blog. It’s both an honor and a thrill to be here. You’re such an inspiration, and a wealth of knowledge, to all of us who write, read and love books!
 
See, guys?! Didn't I tell you she was sweet? Thanks, Jodi!
When you wrote When a Dragon Moves In, did you intend on it becoming a series?

 
Not even in my wildest dreams! Can I gush gratitude for just a moment? I’m so thankful to everyone who has been so supportive of me and Dragon: my incredibly supportive family and friends; my extraordinary editor, Shari Dash Greenspan and the entire Flashlight Press family; my brilliant editor, Howard McWilliam; and the amazing booksellers, librarians, teachers, bloggers and readers who give loving homes to books everywhere.
 
Without the love – and admittedly, the sales! – the second book never would have been possible.
 
The idea OF a sequel initially materialized as a question during one of my first school visits for WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN.
 
I remember smiling at that child, desperately trying to contain myself from having a heart-squishy Sally Field-inspired burst of “They like Dragon! They really like Dragon!”
 
A couple of years later, when my editor introduced the possibility, I Tigger-danced a hole in my carpet.

However, the idea FOR the sequel proved more difficult than I ever could have imagined.
 
I soon learned that a sequel has to echo the first, without being redundant. It has to share a voice, but offer a new conflict. What’s more, Shari wanted the new one to be able to stand on its own, to be more of a companion than a sequel. After three attempts at a new manuscript, and three rejections, I began to wonder if I could pull it off.
 
(That’s a mild description. Tears and depths of despair may or may not have been involved.)
 
Then I realized I was trying too hard. I was obsessed to the point of sheer panic, focused on writing a sequel, instead of a story. When I reset my brain – and heart – on creating a story, featuring characters I loved, I began to relax and listen to their voices once gain.
 
I knew my Boy loved being center stage. What kind of something could impact his life and draw his family’s attention elsewhere…including his beloved Dragon?
 
What had impacted the boys I loved most?

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Ohhhhh. Each other! The something was a sibling.

I wrote the story keeping my boys in mind, their trials, tribulations and jubilations of being both big – and little – brothers. As luck would have it, Howard McWilliam and his lovely wife had just had their second son too.  It’s like it was meant to be.
 
Thankfully, Big Brother decided “this baby” could stay.
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Thank goodness! Are there more Dragon books in the works?
 
*crosses fingers, eyes and toes* I so hope so. Dragon, the boy and his family have so many adventures still to be shared.
 
What do you feel is the secret to finding your voice as a writer? When did you realize that you had “found” yours?
 
What a great, yet complex, question. To be honest, I don’t know if I’ve really found mine yet. I live with an ever-changing array of characters in my head and I tend to channel whichever is speaking the loudest. I’m still exploring and honing my voice. It’s still changing. (I guess you could say I’m going through writer puberty, lol.)
 
That being said, I’m always so delighted when my critique partners come back to me and say, “This is such a Jodi story; it’s so full of heart.” There’s no better compliment than that. That’s something I will forever strive for.


I agree! (Since HEART seems to define your personality, too!)
Do you think visually when you write? If so, were you surprised by Howard McWilliams’s illustrations when you saw them for the first time?

 
I do…and I was beyond delighted when I saw the artwork, both with the original and the sequel. My stories tend to play like little movies in my head. If I’m lucky, I can find the right words to capture the scene. And if I’m extremely fortunate, I get paired with brilliant professionals (like Flashlight editor, Shari Dash Greenspan, and illustrator, Howard McWilliam) who not only embrace my vision, they manage to elevate it to a level I couldn’t even have imagined!
 
Some people don’t realize that, in most cases, an author has no contact with the illustrator while he/she is creating the artwork. When I finally saw the book, and was allowed to let Howard know how much I love, love, LOVED his work , I believe I gushed something like, “Your illustrations are so perfect, the book doesn’t even need my words.” And he answered, “But it was your words that inspired my illustrations.”
 
*heart squish* For obvious reasons, that meant the world to me on a personal level. But it also struck a chord deep in my professional soul.
 
We tend to think of our jobs as writers to find those perfect words to engage, enchant and inspire our readers. But as picture book authors, it’s also our mission to select the words that will ignite the passion and creativity of our illustrators. They are the ones we must entrust to tell the other half of the story, the ones to whom we pass the baton in order to get to the finish line.

 
And with the right editor guiding the way, it’s a magical journey indeed.
 
What do you personally look for in an agent or editor when researching?
 
I originally subbed to Flashlight Press on my own because I don’t have an agent. Yet.
 
Yes, I’m looking. Hoping. Working on it. Because an agent opens up so many possibilities, not only with respect to offering manuscripts to houses that are closed to unagented submissions, but also helping you to hone your craft and navigate the complex world of publishing.
 
I’m looking for an editorial agent/editor who has a heart for stories and a head for business. One who gets the weirdness that is me.

We hear it time and time again, but I think this statement holds a lot of weight: The right agent/editor will come at the right time when the right connection is present. Without that two-way connection and understanding, do we really want to enter a commitment? Probably not. I am confident that the just-right agent is on the way for you, Jodi! And for each of us.

And Jodi has some more just right advice for you in Part Two of this interview: Jodi Moore Talks Mentor Texts. See you there!

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Jodi Moore is author of the award winning WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN (Flashlight Press, 2011), its newly released sequel, WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN AGAIN (Flashlight Press, 2015) and GOOD NEWS NELSON (Story Pie Press, 2012). Jodi is the proud, (admittedly) neurotic mother of two talented young adults and never ceases to be amazed at how far the umbilical cord will stretch. She loves connecting with readers through school and book events. Jodi lives in Pennsylvania with her husband, Larry, and an ever-changing bunch of characters in her head. You can follow her journey at www.writerjodimoore.com
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