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Mentor Text Author Study- Mac Barnett

8/31/2015

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by Carrie Charley Brown
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When you think about author Mac Barnett's books, what are some words that come to mind? (Cue Music)
(If you’re peeking ahead before thinking this through, you haven't had enough fun. Go ahead...play the music. Just don’t blame me if the tune gets stuck in your head the rest of the day.)

Are you ready now? Did you say funny, fresh, and clever? If so, we’ve gathered some of the same gems from his work. And there’s so much more.

Mac Barnett- The Fresh Prince of Picture Books
How is it possible that a silly skunk book can stay on my mind so long after I read it?  This book is following me, just like the skunk followed the man in the story!  People, books, and problems have lasting impressions on us, too. It’s relatable.  I admire how Mac brings deeper thinking into a simple, funny storyline. Fresh? Yes. Clever? Yes. Funny? Very!  But it doesn’t stop with THE SKUNK.

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Mac Barnett- Interactive Interplay Interrogator- (That’s a lot of “Ints”)
One of my favorite picture books of all time is CHLOE AND THE LION. Chloe’s plight to find loose change is interrupted by an arguing author and illustrator. The moment they step into the story, it turns fiction into metafiction, ordinary into fresh and clever, and sweet into laugh out loud. It also pokes fun at unnecessary illustration notes when illustrator Adam Rex turns the intended lion into a dragon. But it doesn’t stop with Chloe.

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Mac Barnett- Dance Partner
We all know what happens in the game of Telephone…the message gets mixed up as it is passed from person to person.

Let’s use TELEPHONE as an example.

 “Tell Peter: Hit Pop Flies and homers” turns into “Tell Peter: Prop planes are for fliers.” What bridges these two statements and why do they change the way they do?  What we see in the first picture is a cardinal with a baseball bat whispering to a goose in a flight cap.  Each character has distinct interests that change the way they interpret things. Relatable, huh? Whether or not Mac had this external plot in mind or he left that up to the illustrator, the fact remains that there was room for an incredible dance to take place.  As Mac said in this interview, “If I finish a manuscript and it makes sense without illustrations, it's a failed text.”

InSAM AND DAVE DIG A HOLE, the text/illustration dance is a tease. We see a giant diamond under the dirt below the boys as they discuss digging in a different direction. Our eyes dance between the text and illustrations, while we shout, “No! Don’t do it!” We root for the boys to find the diamonds and we can’t wait to turn the page to see what happens next.

In MUSTACHE!:
“He spent every Royal Day admiring his Royal Reflection, and not doing much else. Which is why his kingdom was such a Royal Mess. King Duncan didn’t repair the roads. He built billboards instead.”

Let’s think about this in manuscript format. Can you envision what the picture might show? Perhaps not. But, when we see several huge billboards showing the King’s striking handsome figure, we get it. It’s all about the dance between text and art. Mac really gets that. As Mac said in this School Library Journal interview :“
Writing a picture book is the art of finishing an unfinished thing.” It’s all about the dance.
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Mac Barnett- Partner in Crime
Mac has teamed up with some legendary illustrators to create amazing stories. I’d say he has several dream teams. Adam Rex, Jon Scieszka, Jon Klassen, Dan Santat, Patrick McDonnell, and Kevin Cornell are just some of his awesome story partners.
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Mac Barnett- Extra Yarn Lender
When we read Mac’s books, it’s like the endless supply of yarn Annabelle enjoys in EXTRA YARN. Mac just keeps on giving.  I still need to get my hands on Mac’s brand new release, LEO: A GHOST STORY, as well as BILLY TWITTERS AND HIS BLUE WHALE PROBLEM. And of course, I look forward to the tales he has yet to spin.

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In one month, I will have the honor of learning from Mac during the Picture Book Summit. You still have time to join me, as registration is open for a couple more weeks. Picture Book Summit happens on October 3, so in the meantime, grab Mac’s books at the library and start dissecting. If Mac can get President Taft out of the tub, he should be able to unstick your writer’s block, too.

Leave me a comment: What's your favorite Mac Barnett book? How has it helped you with in your writing?

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Ask Carrie (August Edition) + Bonus Links Worth Your While

8/27/2015

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Jen Garrett wants to know:
Do you read mentor texts to help you decide what tense to write in?

Carrie:
Since I write as a pantser most of the time, I normally just go with my gut and write.  My hope is that what comes out on the page will be the most natural tense, but that is not always the case. Sometimes, it takes some experimenting. A simple tense change is not too hard to play with, as you can try a few lines here or there to get a feel for what is more natural. I can’t say that I use a mentor text to “decide” what tense to write in. However, I do use mentor texts to research how stellar stories feel in the right tense.

More than tense, I experiment with point of view. Some of my stories have several different versions, all in a different point of view. Experiencing the comparison first hand not only helps me hear what’s working as I read them all aloud, but also enables me to grow in the process.

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Bonus Links

Writing in Sips and Gulps- from Carrie Charley Brown of Writer’s Rumpus
(Revision and professional development advice)

Making Science Sing: Writing creative nonfiction about science, for kids
- from Christy Mahaly of GROG
(Awesome educational tips and mentor texts to understand creative nonfiction)

Give Your Tale a Twist- from Joyce Wan and the KidLit Summer School Faculty
(Super suggestions on using fiction mentor texts to study twists!)

Dog Adopts Man (and Other Role Reversals)- from Linda Ashman of Picture Book Builders
(Excellent fiction mentor text suggestions for role reversals!)

Do you have a question for me? Feel free to leave it in the comment section. Did you participate in ReFoReMo this year? I’d love to hear about your experience and how you are using mentor texts today.  Check out the submission guidelines for the Revealing ReFoReMo series HERE.

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August Mentor Text Check-In and Challenge: Time to Catch Up & CYBILS Judging

8/18/2015

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by Carrie Charley Brown
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During ReFoReMo, our big goal was to read 105 books in 3 weeks.  Maybe you were able to keep up or exceed this goal and even blog about the books you read?  Bravo! I’d encourage you to consider applying for a position as a CYBILS (Children and Young Adult Bloggers Literary Awards) panelist. The call for judges is now open! As a 2014 Round 1 Judge, I can tell you it was a lot of joyous literary work. Round 1 involves reading 200+ books in about a month and a half.  If you liked the busy library pace we established during ReFoReMo and even blogged about it, you may be a great Round 1 candidate.  Sound interesting? Take a look at the Judging Overview on the CYBILS site. 
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I realize back-to-school-time is super duper crazy for everyone. Therefore, instead of offering a NEW challenge this month, I’d like to extend a catch-up opportunity with the prior challenges I’ve presented to you.

First and foremost, if you feel out of touch with your picture book research habits, I encourage you to complete the entire ReFoReMo challenge again. Every time I reread a book or a post, I pick up something different from it that I didn’t have before. There are links to every 2015 ReFoReMo Author-Educator post HERE. Reread the posts and the recommended books. Add in some brand new books to the mix, as they fit with the post’s theme.

If you’ve already been there and done that, you can catch up with the post-ReFoReMo Challenges at each of these links:

2 months of Diversity Challenges:  (HERE and HERE)

Interactive Challenge


Rhyming Challenge

First Person Challenge

Or, you can challenge yourself to write a quirky character-driven story with inspiration and research from this post on QU-aracters.

Have fun pursuing picture books and sending your kiddos off to school again. I’m looking forward to some quiet reading and writing time!


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August Author: Tammi Sauer Talks Mentor Texts

8/11/2015

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Welcome to part two of Tammi Sauer's author interview! If you have not read PART 1 yet, you can find it HERE. Don't miss out!

Were there any particular mentor texts that inspired you as you created YOUR ALIEN and GINNY LOUISE AND THE SCHOOL SHOWDOWN? How about for the upcoming release of ROAR!?

With YOUR ALIEN, I challenged myself to tell a second person story using a circle structure. Two books that have done this approach well are IF YOU GIVE A MOUSE A COOKIE by Laura Numeroff and WHEN A DRAGON MOVES IN by Jodi Moore.

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With GINNY LOUISE AND THE SCHOOL SHOWDOWN, I didn’t study any particular mentor texts. That book was entirely inspired by a school visit. A few years ago, upon arriving at Marlow Elementary in Marlow, Oklahoma, I discovered that the school mascot was an outlaw. In honor of my visit, the kids were decked out in outlaw gear, right down to the handlebar moustache. Plus, there was a huge banner in the gym. It read, “You’re not at Cowboy Camp anymore, Tammi Sauer. Welcome to OUTLAW CAMP!” Right away, I knew I had to write a picture book about an elementary school full of bad guys. The book is dedicated to the Marlow Elementary Outlaws, and I am heading back to Marlow next month to celebrate.
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As for ROAR!, I set out to write a book entirely in dialogue that was filled with heart, humor, energy--and dragons. Mo Willems is the expert on writing books in dialogue. The ELEPHANT AND PIGGIE series is genius! 
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Mo Willems definitely knows how to keep the kids coming back. After conducting an author study of his books with my first graders, our school library could not keep his books stocked!

If you have not yet read PART ONE of Tammi's interview, visit HERE. And if you are ready to learn more from Tammi, read her books and consider a trip to my neck of the woods for her full day writing craft workshop at our North Texas chapter of SCBWI. But hurry! It's in 2 weeks!

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Tammi Sauer is a full-time picture book author who has visited hundreds of schools and spoken at various conferences across the nation. To date, Tammi has sold 23 picture books to major publishing houses (Bloomsbury, Disney*Hyperion, HarperCollins, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, Simon & Schuster, and Sterling). In addition to winning awards, her books have gone on to do great things. Mostly Monsterly was selected for the 2012 Cheerios Spoonfuls of Stories program. Me Want Pet! was recently released in French which makes her feel extra fancy. And Nugget and Fang, along with Tammi herself, was featured on the Spring 2015 Scholastic Book Fair DVD which was shared with millions of students. This is a link to the video: http://www.scholastic.com/bookfairs/ESvideo.

You can visit Tammi online at tammisauer.com and at picturebookbuilders.com.

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Revealing ReFoReMo: Carrie Charley Brown Examines QU-aracters

8/4/2015

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Memorable characters may be evil or fun or quirky. They could be sweet or different or unique. If you could have any performance role, who would you choose? Alice in Wonderland? I’ll pass. Give me The Mad Hatter. Harry Potter? No thanks. I’ll take Bellatrix Lestrange. When auditioning for theatrical roles as a child, I didn’t necessarily want the lead role- just the most fun. Oklahoma- I couldn’t decide whether Aunt Eller or Ado Annie was the most fun. I ended up with Aunt Eller. I didn’t want to play little orphan Annie, but instead, the tough flawed role of Pepper. Who stands out to you and what does this say about your writing?

I’m drawn to the quirky, flawed side. Aren’t we all? Just a little bit? It brings entertainment. And a picture book is one huge opportunity to entertain. Funny…with all of the amazing posts from our 2015 ReFoReMo challenge, we didn’t have one specifically written for characters. (Although, Susanna Leonard Hill did touch on this important topic in HER POST.) 

So, let’s dig in! Right here, right now. 

“Qu-aracters” with a Capital Quirk

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A big round of applause for Cat from HERE COMES THE EASTER CAT!

Cat= Grumpy, jealous, a little bit devious= funny

In Cat's first book (Easter Cat), he is motivated to take action against the Easter Bunny and ends up [PARTIAL SPOLIER ALERT] transforming with a compassionate action by the end.

And Cat's quirkiness is catching, as he continues to be featured in new books.

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On your feet for Mojo from BIG BAD BUBBLE!

Mojo= Paranoid, fearful, excitable, over-reactive= silly

Mojo is convinced that bubbles will attack all of the creatures of La La Land and ends up finding out that bubbles are harmless…but [SPOILER ALERT] butterflies are something else.

Mojo’s transformation is what I like to call…he learned something, but then worried himself into a tizzy again. Hilarious!

(And Adam Rubin leaves a "quirky stamp" on his other books, too.)

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Standing ovation for CRANKENSTEIN!

Crankenstein= Complainer, moody, unpredictable= amusing, playful

Crankenstein is an ordinary boy until unfavorable events transform him to a breaking point…but [SPOILER ALERT] a similar friend is enough to bring a good mood.
    
Quaracters are catching, huh?


Recipe for Quirky Characters
Acquire generous helpings of unfavorable moods.
Mix in a unbelievable mission. [Examples: Payback Easter Bunny, spread disastrous news…]  
Blend with funny, silly, or exaggerated actions.
Bake until transformation occurs.
Throw in a surprise ending.

Which characters have left an impression on you? Do you prefer quirky over sweet and innocent? Which performance role would you love to play? Why? Share your analysis below, then head over to Carrie On… Together to catch insider info on Mighty Media Press.

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