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ReFoReMo Day 19:  Kirsti Calls the Doctor

3/19/2016

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by Kirsti Call (and a special guest)
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Reading stellar picture books and interacting with the ReFoReMo community has me inspired!  I love figuring out what works and thinking deeply about why I like some picture books more than others.  Fantastic illustrations are essential and as writers we have to acknowledge their importance.  There’s a lot we can learn by studying the interplay between words and pictures.   Here are some questions that I ask myself:

1. How does the text alone make me want to turn the page? How about the illustration?

2. How does the text leave things unsaid in a way that allows the pictures to help propel the action?

3. What words infuse emotion into the story and give the illustrator an opportunity for vivid interpretations?

4. 
How do the illustrations enhance the written word, and how can I apply these lessons to my writing?
As I reflect on illustrations, I  wonder what an illustrator would think...so I make a call.

“Hello?  Is this the doctor?  I have an emergency!  Is this Dr. Mira Reisberg?" Thankfully, it is!


Kirsti: What exactly should illustrators consider when transitioning from study to studio?


Dr. Mira Reisberg: The key is to have fun with it and pay attention to what you like or don't like so that you can learn from it. I hope the following reflection questions help:


1. How does the illustrator show emotion through body language, expression, and color?


2. Do they have a recognizable color palette throughout the book that helps convey the overall mood of the books?


3. What does the illustrator do to make her or his contributions fresh and original and do they complement or extend the text? If so how?


4. How does the illustrator mix it up to have different compositions on each spread that play with scale, point of view, balance, and perspective?


​Thank you Dr. Mira! After reviewing Dr. Mira's questions, I realize that even those of us who aren't illustrators can benefit from thinking like one. Dr. Mira kind of saved the day, didn't she?
  
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Mira is giving away her course, The Hero's Art Journey. This is an incredible course for anyone who is interested in exploring their artistic self!  Thank you, Mira! To be eligible, you must be a fully registered participant, comment on this post, read daily, and keep records of your progress.
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​Kirsti Call reads, critiques and revises every day.  She is a member of various critique groups, and blogs for Writer's Rumpus, Children's Book Academy, and the Institute of Children's Literature.  As the published author of The Raindrop Who Couldn't Fall and a homeschool mom, Kirsti coaches revision for children ages 5-18.  Her school visits involve interactive writing, singing, and of course, reading for research! Kirsti contributed as a 2015 CYBILS YA Fiction panelist and is proud to be the 2016 ReFoReMo co-coordinator. You can follow her journey at www.kirsticall.com.

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Mira Reisberg has helped MANY authors and illustrators get published. She has worn just about every hat in the industry including art director, editor, award-winning illustrator and author, kid lit university professor, and literary agent. Mira holds a PhD in Education and Cultural Studies with a focus on children's literature. She is also the Director of the innovative online school Children’s Book Academy. Mira will be co-teaching the highly successful Craft and Business of Writing Children's Picture Books with Random House Editor Kelly Delaney in May. To find out more and receive early access click here:http://bit.ly/yourCBAtribe. Mira is also working on an on-demand and in-demand Writing and Illustrating Graphic Novels course that should also be lots of fun.

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ReFoReMo Day 12: Alayne Kay Christian Reflects on Bridging the Gap from Reading to Writing

3/12/2016

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By Alayne Kay Christian

Thanks to Carrie and Kirsti for inviting me to participate in ReFoReMo 2016 as faculty. This event leaves the kid lit writing community with valuable go-to resources all year round, and I am honored to be a part of it.


When analyzing mentor texts or your own work, it’s important to look deeper than the surface.

There are many ways to engage readers. Here are four questions that will help:
  • What expectations do opening sentences create in your mind? 
  • What words, images, or punctuation techniques entice you to turn each page?
  • What are the unanswered questions that urge you to continue reading?
  • Does the ending fulfill your expectations by answering all your questions and tying up 
          loose ends? If so, how?

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Alayne is giving away one scholarship for her brand new course: Art of Arc; How to Analyze Your Picture Book Manuscript! This course will help your story sing!  Thanks Alayne!  To be eligible, you must be a fully registered participant, comment on this post, read daily, and keep records of your progress. 

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Alayne Kay Christian is the award-winning author of Butterfly Kisses for Grandma and Grandpa, a life coach, and teacher of Art of Arc: How to Analyze Your Picture Book Manuscript (deepen your understanding of picture books written with a classic arc).

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ReFoReMo Sharing Contest Results + Preparing to Assess a Mentor Text

2/2/2016

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Congratulations to Charlotte Dixon, Darlene Koppel, and Jackie Kruzie for winning the sharing contest and some beautiful mentor texts!

Just the act of reading mentor texts improves our instincts when writing, but how do you approach the research aspect? I like to read as many books as I can on the topic of the manuscript I'm writing.  I also look for books that mimic the structure that I'm going for.  Am I writing a metafiction story?  Then Do Not Open This Book!  is the perfect mentor text.  Is my story a fractured fairy tale?  The Three Ninja Pigs is right up my alley.  Am I writing a cumulative story?  Your Alien is a good place for me to start.  

As I read each book, I ask myself these questions:  
1.  What do I like about this book?  What works?
2.  What don't I like?  What doesn't work?
3.  Do I want to read this again?  Why?
4.  Would kids relate to this?
5.  Would this make kids laugh?

​Once I've read as much as I can about my topic or structure, then I have a better idea of what works, what I like, and what has already been done.  My built-in panel of five children reminds me what it's like to be a kid and when I write, I tackle my story with my newfound knowledge and a fresh perspective!  

As we continue to Reveal ReFoReMo to you, let's reflect upon Romelle Broas's experience as a ReFoReMo-er.  In this post,
 she not only shares her experience, but also an incredible tool she used for assessing mentor texts during ReFoReMo 2015.  Her assessment tool is also located at the bottom of the tools section on the ReFoReMo website, here. Take a look and give it a try! 


Timeline
February 15:            Registration opens
February 23:            Reading list goes live on
February 27-29:       PreReFoReMo: Starting off Strong

March 1-31:              ReFoReMo!



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