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November Mentor Text Check-In and Challenge: The Ones that DON'T Grab You

11/17/2015

 
By Carrie Charley Brown
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This month’s challenge is going to be different than all the rest. You won’t see any book covers here. Yes, I am STILL challenging you to find mentor texts, but I’m taking a slightly different angle this time. All you’ll need is a trip to the library and a notebook. Hooray for libraries and notebooks! Agreed?
 
What exactly are we searching for? The titles and stories that DON’T grab us. Yes, you heard me right. I’d like you to pay attention to your subjective judgments. What are you NOT picking up?  
 
Why would we take the time to do this? We all know how subjective this business is. Surely, you have read books that made you think, “How did this get published?” The answer: Somebody loved it! Chances are, the author loved the book at that time, too. Something awakened their muse or their heart or tickled their funny bone. An emotion stirred inside of them to help them find their voice. Paying attention to the things we don’t like to read can help us find our voices, too.

 
Here is your challenge:
Browse the spines and notice the titles that pop out at you. Now, ignore those titles and look next door to the ones that you would never have picked up. Read some of those stories and take notes. You may or may not end up liking the story. I want you to pay attention to the things that you DON’T like. You might also browse through your Goodreads account and find the titles you were less than fond of. Pull them back out.
 
Was it simply a title that needed more pop? Or was it poor execution?
Lack of emotion?
Unrelatable characters?
A boring concept?
As you take notes, you should be searching for threads of similarities. Things that always bother you or don’t sit right.
 
Go ahead and exercise a critique of sorts- for your eyes only, of course. Through that critique, you will see what you would have done to strengthen the story. That’s where your voice kicks in. When we critique, we are offering up our subjective voice.
 
Now, go ahead and reverse this process. Select some of your favorite titles and take notes on the same types of things: Language devices, emotion, characters, concepts, plot styles, point of view… all of it! What similar threads are present? Are any of those things running through your current writing?
 
Finding your voice is not an overnight revelation. It’s a long process, and many multi-published authors admit that they are still searching for theirs. That makes sense when you consider that we are always changing and growing as we develop our craft. As outsiders looking in, sometimes it’s easier for us to see those similarities that qualify a voice. Here on the Carrie On… blogs, we’ve been analyzing voice each month through our Author Study posts.  You’ll see voice present itself through almost anything an author writes. As editor Jill Santopolo shared at a recent SCBWI North Texas workshop, an author’s voice even comes out in an email. Have you ever noticed that? You’ve probably even picked up some of my voice by reading my posts. Have fun finding yours. If you see mine, let me know.

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Jodi McKay link
11/17/2015 07:35:27 am

Carrie, this is a great idea! Switching it up like this will give me an even better understanding of my own writing style and the types of books that I want to write. Thanks!!

Carrie Charley Brown
11/17/2015 10:13:49 am

Yay, Jodi! Enjoy!

Julie J Burchstead
11/17/2015 10:49:45 am

Sometimes looking at things from a new perspective really shakes things up. Thanks for this post.

Charlotte Dixon
11/17/2015 01:20:26 pm

Wow! Thank you, Carrie, for this great idea. I always pick up the popular PB's. I will give this a try :)

maria gianferrari link
11/17/2015 02:11:51 pm

Great idea, Carrie!!

Dee Knabb
11/17/2015 04:05:25 pm

Did not think of analyzing these. Thanks, Carrie.

JEN Garrett link
11/17/2015 05:55:49 pm

What a great idea! Am going to the library soon. :)

Keila Dawson link
11/18/2015 12:51:15 am

Good tip. It's such a subjective business, we should also know what doesn't grab our attention because we won't find our voices in those works.

Romelle Broas link
11/18/2015 01:00:38 am

Great exercise! Headed to the library tomorrow!


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