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ReFoReMo Day 22: Paul Czajak Celebrates Beauty in Simplicity

3/23/2015

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You are in for another double feature today.  After reading and commenting on Paul’s post today, travel over to Carrie On… Together and visit Illustrators The Brothers Hilts.  The Czajak/Hilts team just celebrated SEAVER THE WEAVER's book birthday, a mentor text you will definitely want to check out. (Plus, there is a giveaway!)

by Paul Czajak

If there is one thing that I have gleaned from the great picture books that I lean toward it's the idea of simplicity. Simplicity in the topic, the arc and sometimes the writing itself.  For me I love when an author can take nothing and turn it into something. The ability to write about the simplest topic and create an engaging story truly shows talent and for me, it is something that I strive for. Here are 5 books that seem simple on the surface but because of how they are written they are much more then just a story line.

I Want My Hat Back - Jon Klassen

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This story might be the gold standard when it comes to simple. A Bear lost his hat and he wants it back. This story works because of the way it ends, an ending I didn't see coming. The shock value makes the simplicity of this story shine.

Stuck - Oliver Jeffers

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I love this book. A boys kite is suck in a tree and he wants to get it back, let the insanity begin! This is a great example of how you can use the absurd to make a simple story sing.

The Dark
-  Lemony Snicket and Jon Klassen 

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A boy, who is afraid of the dark, has his night light go out. What makes this simple story great is the writing. It's much more complicated then other stories that I have read. Snicket's ability to create a spooky atmosphere using the dark as an anthropomorphic entity is fantastic.  So just because the story is simple doesn't mean the writing has to be.

The Dot - Peter Reynolds

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This story hits the simplicity level on two fronts. The first is the subject, a girl thinks she can't draw but then finds out art can be anything. The second is what she draws, a dot. When it comes to creating art there isn't anything much simpler then jabbing your pen on a piece of paper. But what makes this story great is how profound it is. A simple story line doesn't mean a  stupid story line.

Sam and Dave Dig a Hole - Mac Barnett

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The title says it all, two boys dig a hole in hopes to find something special. What makes this great is the interaction a child will have with this story. My kids actually yelled when Sam and Dave stopped digging in a particular direction only to miss that special thing by one shovel full. Allowing the reader to know more then the characters invites participation even in a simple story.

When writing your story try to keep it simple, that way it becomes more relatable to your audience. Use your creativity, your writing prowess to make that simple story line great. That is what will make you a great writer, not what you write about but how you write it.

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Paul Czajak is the Authour of the award winning picture book series Monster&Me (Mighty Media). His newest title in the series Monster Needs A Party is to be released April 2015. Paul's first non-monster story, Seaver the Weaver (Mighty Media), released March 17.

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Jilanne Hoffmann
3/21/2015 06:08:16 pm

I think this post goes right along with the old adage, still waters run deep. Thanks for sharing your selections!

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Maria Marshall
3/21/2015 06:38:34 pm

Wonderful post, I love Sam and Dave and Stuck. And the other are on my library list. Thank you for excellent suggestions.

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Juliann (Juli) Caveny link
3/21/2015 07:10:27 pm

I found STUCK early last week. What a fun story! I had to share it with my 8th grade students. They loved the surprise twist and simple story too! Of all the books I've read for Carrie's challenge, it's still in my list of top 10.

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Pat Miller
3/21/2015 07:23:39 pm

Less is so much more...more skill, more work, and for the reader, more magical. That is for the list.

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Yvonne Mes link
3/21/2015 08:07:28 pm

Great suggestions. 'Stuck' is on the top of my list for mentor texts. It seems so effortless, but it is so clever. 'I Want My Hat Back' follows closely!

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Maria Laso
3/21/2015 09:19:28 pm

Simplicity is never simple!

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Paul
3/22/2015 01:10:28 am

I never said simple was easy!

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Rebecca Colby
3/21/2015 09:26:00 pm

I can see that some of the same books and authors are a hit over and over. I definitely need to study some of these titles that have been mentioned more than 2 times! Thanks for some great recommendations!

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Linda Schueler link
3/21/2015 10:19:09 pm

Simple advice. Thanks.

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Kirsti Call
3/21/2015 10:24:40 pm

Thanks for the great post, Paul. I'm going to re-read these titles with your thoughts in mind!

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Marianne Kuzujanakis
3/22/2015 12:08:41 am

Thanks, Paul! These are all stellar PBs. Interesting how three of the five have the same uber-talented illustrator. I have these at home right now. I will re-read them this morning.

Once again, the trend of single author/illustrators also leads with three of the five examples. This definitely allows for more sparse text. The other two PBs were well-known close direct collaborations. Not something most writers can ever hope to obtain.

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Paul link
3/22/2015 01:09:36 am

Hi Marianne yes it definitely helps for these authors and illustrators to be at the top of their game to allow for collaborationtion . But remember at one point no one ever herd of any of them. All it takes is one.

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Marianne Kuzujanakis
3/22/2015 07:16:39 am

THANKS, Paul! Your perspective is very encouraging!

Elaine Kiely Kearns
3/22/2015 12:12:23 am

This is a great post with some of my favorite texts. thanks, Paul!

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Beth Gallagher
3/22/2015 12:43:14 am

Just checked most of these out of the library yesterday, and am excited to dig into them. Thanks for the suggestions!

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Elaine Hillson
3/22/2015 01:30:16 am

Thanks for the great post.

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Debra Shumaker
3/22/2015 01:41:42 am

More things to ponder. Thanks so much!

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Michele Katz link
3/22/2015 01:44:41 am

Great post! I've had The Dot in my personal collection for a long time because of the simplicity of both the story AND the illustrations. Very excited to check out the additional titles you have recommended if they follow in the same vein! Thanks so much!

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Heather Pierce Stigall
3/22/2015 01:51:14 am

I love all of these books! You are so right -- each tells a complex story with very few words. Brilliant!

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Deirdre Englehart
3/22/2015 02:02:06 am

Great post! I love the books, they are wonderful examples!

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Lisa Connors link
3/22/2015 02:26:34 am

Thanks for the list. I'm really not a fan of I Want My Hat Back...guess I should try it again because it keeps appearing on these lists. I do love Sam and Dave Dig a Hole.

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Paul
3/22/2015 08:24:30 am

The thing is you don't have to like the book. In fact there are many books that have been mentioned that I'm not a fan of, but I appreciate what the book was able to accomplish. In this case a very simple story.

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Carrie Charley Brown
3/23/2015 11:44:33 am

Hi, Lisa. Just to echo what Paul said a bit- This business is so subjective. Everyone has their likes and dislikes, and that probably tells you a little bit about the types of books you like to write, as well. Sometimes I read a book for the first time, and it reads average. I may pick it back up a few years later and see something different about it or think, "Ya, know...I was wrong." It can have a lot to do with what we need or want to learn at the time of reading, as well. It is good that you are forming your own opinions. Taking notes and reviewing books will help you learn so much, and write and critique better, too. Have fun discovering!

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Juliana Lee link
3/22/2015 02:48:48 am

Love this! Simplicity at its best... Simple does not equate with stupid.

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Deborah Allmand
3/22/2015 03:08:44 am

Paul, thanks so much for the great post. I have read two of the books you recommended. I look forward to reading the others. Thanks again.

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Renee Kirchner
3/22/2015 03:14:40 am

Thanks for the great suggestions!

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maria gianferrari link
3/22/2015 03:23:58 am

Thanks, Paul! I'm going to re-visit The Dot & The Dark, and I've just requested Stuck since I haven't read that one before. I agree--simple elegance is key!

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shirley Fadden link
3/22/2015 03:40:34 am

All terrific picks and comments. I too love the spooky atmosphere Lemony Snicket created in The Dark. You can feel the quietness that surrounds the spooky sounds as well as the increase of the boy's heartbeat as the story progresses.

Thank you!

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Paul
3/22/2015 08:27:07 am

I love the way he describes the dark as always being there, Behind the curtain or in the corner.

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Therese Nagi
3/22/2015 03:57:01 am

Paul thanks for sharing the great book list! Yes, simple well written books look effortless but aren't.

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Sue Heavenrich
3/22/2015 04:16:52 am

I love the principle of KISS - whether it's politics or story-writing. These are great books. I especially love the Dot and digging the hole... but Stuck is right up there.

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Rachel Hamby link
3/22/2015 04:30:18 am

The simply brilliant picture books are always my favorite. Thanks for some new titles to study.

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Lori Dubbin
3/22/2015 05:08:43 am

Thanks for these titles. Simple sure isn't easy. Back to reading and gleaning.

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Heidi Yates
3/22/2015 05:32:45 am

Thank you Paul! These are great recommendations. I love the idea of keeping simple. :)

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Julie Burchstead
3/22/2015 05:32:51 am

This is great advise. Reminds me of this adage I recently saw: Writing a picture book is like writing War and Peace in Haiku. There is an art to aspire to, to be rich in story in few words. These choices give me examples of how it can be done...and much to aspire to.

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ann magee
3/22/2015 05:33:40 am

Simple is hard!!! Thanks for the motivation, though. :)

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Kathy Mazurowski
3/22/2015 06:14:21 am

Love the simplicity of these favorites. My mantra for today... Keep it simple s..... Thanks

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Suzy Leopold
3/22/2015 06:32:24 am

It is so true, less is more. It is not WHAT you write but HOW you write. Excellent suggested titles. Thank you, Paul.

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Laura J / Laura Jenkins
3/22/2015 06:36:56 am

Wouldn't be nice if everything was simple?

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Alice Fulgione
3/22/2015 06:56:55 am

I love The Dot & Sam & Dave Dig A Hole and I can't wait to read the others.

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AJ Irving link
3/22/2015 08:01:51 am

Excellent post, Paul! Thank you!

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Janie Reinart
3/22/2015 08:06:24 am

Paul, thanks for the great list. Best wishes on your new book!

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Paul
3/22/2015 08:31:02 am

Thanks Janie!

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Keila Dawson link
3/22/2015 08:19:54 am

Nice reminder Paul. Great example of when we should sweat the small stuff.

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Cassie Bentley
3/22/2015 08:39:55 am

Excellent choices. Your reply about not liking a book, but studying the simplicity, plot, characters, etc is well taken too. Thank you and good luck with your new books.

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Robin Currie link
3/22/2015 08:52:08 am

I read weekly - Headstart kids - For ESL children the simplicity factor is huge in their enjoyment and learning. Thanks for the suggestions.

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Joyce Tucker link
3/22/2015 09:35:11 am

Simple is awesome! I think I try too hard sometimes and then give up because I think something is too simple. I appreciate your post :)

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Laura Lee Malesh
3/22/2015 10:41:36 am

Thank you for the great suggestions. I am looking forward to reading and reading each of them.

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Leslie Goodman link
3/22/2015 11:00:30 am

Yeah! Another selection of great mentor texts! I'm familiar with a couple of these books, but I'll revisit them along with the new ones.

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Sandy Perlic
3/22/2015 11:03:32 am

What great insights, Paul. Now I want to look at "Stuck" and "The Dark" again...

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Saba
3/22/2015 12:09:14 pm

Thank you Paul for great advice and examples you shared with us.

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Kaye Baillie
3/22/2015 12:34:12 pm

This is the first post where I had already read the suggested books. Would love to read them again though, that's how good they are.

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Angela Hawkins link
3/22/2015 12:52:18 pm

Every one of these titles are amazing! If you've not read them....don't walk, RUN to your nearest library or book store! Thanks for the simplistic reminder Paul!

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Marlaina (Gray) Cockcroft link
3/22/2015 01:12:28 pm

"The Dark" is brilliant. Thanks for the picks, Paul!

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Rita Lorraine Hubbard link
3/22/2015 01:14:58 pm

Hi Paul, thanks for this list. Ooooh, I really want to read The Dark. The title and the cover are both simple but evoke a lot of emotions. Thanks again.

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Val McCammon
3/22/2015 01:17:38 pm

Great line about "simple" is not "stupid" -- and these examples are so much more! Thank you Paul.

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Rene` Diane Aube
3/22/2015 02:22:20 pm

Thank you, Paul, for reminding us to keep things simple yet profound...hmmm...chewing on this nugget... I look forward to reading/studying your list of examples...and hopefully digesting some of it through my pen :)

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Laura Renauld
3/22/2015 02:51:00 pm

The Dot is one of my favorites. Thanks for deconstructing the simple storyline for us.

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Jarmila Del Boccio link
3/22/2015 02:53:29 pm

Thanks for your insights, Paul. Simplicity is the key!

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Vivian Kirkfield link
3/22/2015 03:30:50 pm

You wouldn't think it would be some complicated to write simply...but somehow, it is! Thanks for these great mentor texts, Paul...I've read all but one...now I'm off to study them. :)

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Romelle Broas link
3/22/2015 06:12:54 pm

Excellent post, Paul! Thanks for the tips on turning a simple topic into an engaging story. Great examples.

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Caroline Twomey link
3/23/2015 02:04:48 am

Great post-thank you! Stuck is one of my favorite PBs! I love the simplicity, the humor, the interactivity between texts and illust. I'm looking forward to reading two of the others that I haven't read yet! Thanks for the great examples ")

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Erin Nowak link
3/23/2015 03:38:37 am

I love these suggestions. As an illustrator working on further developing myself as a writer, I have found simplicity to be one of the most important tools in my arsenal. I have a tendency to want to over do it, visually and writing wise, and have found that placing certain limits or "rules" when I'm creating can make the final product more effective AND the process of writing and illustrating more fun. Thanks!!

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Stephanie Geckle link
3/23/2015 04:57:00 am

Thank you for the reminder to keep things simple! In my writing, I tend to keep piling more and more STUFF until it turns in one big heaping MESS! And that's when I get STUCK. Which reminds me, I am really looking forward to reading that recommendation!

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lauri meyers link
3/23/2015 05:47:59 am

Love how you look at simple from several different angles.

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Jennifer Judd link
3/23/2015 08:32:26 am

Love your thoughts on simplicity, and your book selections, Paul!

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JEN Garrett link
3/23/2015 10:47:33 am

I like this post because shows how simple wording doesn't have to mean "dumb-down." I WANT MY HAT BACK is an excellent example. The words themselves can be read by a young reader, but the ideas meet the child at a higher plane - where they are actually thinking.

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shirley johnson
3/23/2015 12:52:27 pm

Great books! Enjoyed the post!

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Kristi Veitenheimer
3/23/2015 01:26:19 pm

I really want to work on keeping the text simple, so I really need to get these mentor texts. Thanks!

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Teresa MI Schaefer link
3/24/2015 05:44:06 am

Love simplicity and your simple suggestions.

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Carrie Finison
3/24/2015 06:35:39 am

I think the beautiful simplicity of picture books is what draws me to them the most - and what makes many people think they are 'easy' to write. Often, it feels like the reverse is true! The simpler the story, the more difficult it is to pull off.

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Janet Smart link
3/24/2015 11:41:53 am

Wonderful post. I love The Dot!

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MD Knabb
3/24/2015 07:39:55 pm

This type of book is perfect…spare prose and great art. I loved The Dark.

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Mary Worley
3/26/2015 03:54:24 am

This is the first time I had read all the books in a post. Much easier to consider the point being made as I read it. I think the beauty of these books is how much they allow the reader to ponder what is really going on in the story, and not every reader comes to the same conclusion. This is hard to do in my own writing in part because critiques come back with questions about what I want to be ambiguous (left up to the reader to decide). It's difficult to know if the technique isn't working (w/o the illustrations) or if it's just the nature of this type of story.

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Sandy Powell
3/26/2015 05:08:45 am

I've read most of these, but I will go back and read them with "Simplicity" in mind. Thanks.

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Manju Howard link
3/26/2015 01:47:04 pm

I completely agree that "A simple story line doesn't mean a stupid story line." The Dot and Ish by Peter Reynolds are two of my favorite mentor texts.

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rita antoinette borg link
3/27/2015 10:45:27 pm

I looked up all these books love them esp the dot

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Jeanette Bradley
3/30/2015 02:07:28 am

I've actually read all of these! Yay! In addition to all of them mastering simplicity, they all have an interesting interplay between the text on the page and the images and use the white of the page as a sophisticated design element. I think they are deceptively simple!

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Karen Nordseth Roos
3/30/2015 04:09:14 pm

paul, thank you for these wonderful examples of simple picture books. i am completely smitten by simple. it is one of the things most important to me in my writing as well.

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Anita Banks
3/31/2015 04:19:11 am

Thank you for the suggestions!

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