ReFoReMo Day 8: Janie Reinart Contemplates the Heart of It All

3/8/2016

“The head does not hear…until the heart has listened…”

~James Stevens

What makes your heart stop mid-beat when you are reading a story? For me it is:

1. The detail of red shoes.

2. The voice of innocence.

3. The layers of meaning.

4. A question answered.

5. The humor in the story.

Janie is giving away Anne Whitford Paul's book, Writing Picture Books: A Hands-On Guide from Story Creation to Publication! This is an incredible resource for picture book writers! Thanks Janie!
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Janie Reinart has worn many hats--educator, author, theater major, professional puppeteer, interactive musical storyteller, a clown hat in a hospital’s gentle clowning ministry, and a poet's beret at an inner city school helping children find their voice. She lives in Ohio with her husband. She's always up for a game, hopscotch, or dress-up. Ask her thirteen grandchildren.

427 Comments

Katelyn Aronson

3/8/2016 01:46:29 am

Couldn't agree with you more, Janie Reinart! Speaking of "the detail of red shoes," here's a book that recently took my breath away: "The Mermaid & The Shoe," written & illustrated by K.G. Campbell. My heart did stop mid-beat when I found it!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:30:07 am

Katelyn, thank you for the recommendation. Interesting to think about shoes in stories-Wizzard of Oz, There was an Old Woman. . .

Karla Valenti

3/8/2016 05:13:03 am

Thank you for sharing this! I especially agree with your point on the details. When we love something in real life, we tend to focus on the every little detail of that thing/person we love. Doing so in our writing, tricks the reader (in a way) into falling in love as well.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:37:04 am

Karla you are so right. Making the connection with our readers is key. The detail pulls them in.

Sara Gentry

3/8/2016 05:26:28 am

Thank you for this list. For me, I would add to it "the unexpected twist", as in Mo Willems's That Is NOT a Good Idea.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:41:04 am

Sara, I love that surprise twist too! (Lol, we could only use 60 words for our article. ) Thank you for adding.

Karen Condit

3/8/2016 12:46:53 pm

Yes! Good point, Sara...the unexpected keeps us reading the story over and over again!

Deborah Allmand

3/8/2016 05:40:48 am

Janie, I also think it is the surprise at the end along with all the other things you listed. Thank you for inspiring us to look for the heart in a picture book. What a great prize!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:43:22 am

Deborah, I know. Who doesn't love a surprise. Hope you win a prize.

Rebecca Colby

3/8/2016 05:42:27 am

It's humor that does it for me every time. Thanks for a great list, Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:49:38 am

Hi Rebecca, I love when I'm reading to my grandkids and they start giggling. Happened recently with The Book With No Pictures by BJ Novak.

Karen Condit

3/8/2016 12:48:42 pm

Just had the same experience with the grandkids!

Vicki Reinhardt

3/8/2016 06:01:30 am

I love recommended book lists! And I'm going to the library today, so perfect timing. =)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:56:30 am

Vicki, Check out The Right Word :Roget and his Thesaurus by Jen Bryant. Roget made lists.

Andrea Mack link

3/8/2016 06:19:07 am

I love surprises while I'm reading, whether they are an unexpected detail, or a plot twist or another layer of meaning that I didn't notice at first. Anything that I didn't expect when I opened the book.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:02:35 am

Andrea, also the surprise of illustrations that add can add another story layer.

Andrea link

3/9/2016 07:41:31 am

Yes! So true!

Laura Purdie Salas link

3/8/2016 06:24:36 am

This is an aspect of pbs I struggle with. Figuring out the heart of each particular story. Just read RABBITYNESS and loved it! Off to read the others. Thanks!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:11:25 am

Laura I think you are winning that struggle with your beautiful word choices--like in A Leaf Can Be.

Julie Burchstead

3/8/2016 06:25:52 am

Wow! Great message from a woman with a whole cast of talents. Some new books here for me to explore. Thanks!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:13:51 am

Thanks, Julie. I do love picture books.

Lucky Jo

3/8/2016 06:54:03 am

I also love unexpected detail in the illustrations. These are the books you can look at over and over, discovering new and hidden touches each time. See everything done by the wondrously ponderable author/illustrator Pamela Zagarenski. And humor is fun too.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:17:02 am

Lucky Jo how I wish I could draw. Will check out your suggestion. Thanks.

Patricia Nozell

3/8/2016 07:08:34 am

Love finding those little details that bring the heart into a story! Thank you for sharing - I can't wait to study these books.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:18:33 am

Have so much fun Patricia.

Mona

3/8/2016 07:13:07 am

Red shoes! Your observation makes me want to read this book. Amazing what illustrators do with author's words. Thanks Janie.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:22:29 am

Mona, the author actually adds the shoes into the text. Let me know what you think about the story. The shoes ground it for me.

Janet Smart link

3/8/2016 07:29:48 am

Thanks for the list. It's the little things that sometimes make a book stand out in the crowd.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:37:42 am

You are welcome, Janet. Yes, we want our writing to stand out!

Jess Townes link

3/8/2016 07:30:54 am

I love a picture book with layers of meaning - or discovering that your kids found a layer that you didn't see and vice versa. It provides such a great opportunity for conversation and a "read it again!" moment. These were excellent selections, thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:47:36 am

You are welcome, Jess. It is so much fun when kids notice things we don't!

debra daugherty

3/8/2016 07:36:05 am

Janie, PBs with a surprise twist are my favorite. Ann's book is a great prize. I have it and check back with it time and again.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:59:03 am

Debra what is your favorite PB with a surprise twist?

Terri DeGezelle link

3/8/2016 07:37:06 am

I have my copy of Anne Whitford Paul's book, Writing Picture Books: A Hands-On Guide from Story Creation to Publication on my bedside table, plus several dozen picture books. Janie, thank you for making me think and touching my heart.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:00:31 am

You are most welcome,Terri.

Manju Howard

3/8/2016 07:41:06 am

Hi, Janie! I love all Sam's OTTER picture books. They are perfect mentor texts for an authentic character's voice.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:03:10 am

Manju, I love Sam's books too! Read them to my grandchildren all the time. We could start a fan club!

Val McCammon

3/8/2016 07:42:33 am

Thanks for the great books-with-heart recommendations, Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:04:22 am

My pleasure, Val.

Beverly Marsh

3/8/2016 07:44:58 am

Thank you for emphasizing the importance of heart in picture books. It is a great reminder that my stories must have a heart connection.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:07:27 am

You are welcome, Beverly. It is something I strive for as well.

Kathy Halsey

3/8/2016 07:46:38 am

Janie, your post is so poetic in and of itself. You have boiled hook down to its essence. BRAVO!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:09:18 am

Thanks, Kathy. Love that quote. Good to see you here.

Anita Banks

3/8/2016 07:56:15 am

Thank you for the recommendations.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:10:31 am

Glad you liked it, Anita.

Cathy Ballou Mealey link

3/8/2016 07:57:04 am

Anne Whitford Paul's book (Writing Picture Books: A Hands-On Guide from Story Creation to Publication) is one of my very favorites. Each time I open it I find a tidbit that has taken on new meaning. Wonderful post Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:12:00 am

Thank you,Cathy.

Anita Jones link

3/8/2016 08:00:29 am

What a "rockin" grandma...13 grandchildren to inspire..wonderful! I'm inspired too, because I know how important it is to have "heart" in my work..at least I try....Thank you Janie for you message...and a reminder that we can do anything with heart....well, except the puppeteer gig!!!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:14:51 am

It is a "hands on" gig for sure Anita.

Marianne Kuzujanakis link

3/8/2016 08:01:17 am

Thanks Janie. A picture indeed speaks a 1000 words.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:16:13 am

You are welcome, Marianne.

Sharon Putnam

3/8/2016 08:02:56 am

Thank you for sharing and inspiring us to look for the heart in a picture book. My favorites are the unexpected twists a book can take

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:21:44 am

Sharon, What is your favorite PB with a twist?

Shelley Kinder

3/8/2016 08:05:46 am

Thanks, Janie! So good to think about HEART. Must read Rabittyness right now....the title alone makes me want to jump in...and the cover illustration...LOVE!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:10:09 am

Shelley the subtleness of the text is breathtaking.

Linda Thomas

3/8/2016 08:15:27 am

Your post touched my heart with the opening quote! And the cover alone on Infinity stole it completely! Thank you, Janie, for your book recommendations!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:11:18 am

Enjoy, Linda.

Amy Murrell

3/8/2016 08:16:57 am

My favorites are the ones that are both sweet and funny. I thought The Tooth Fairy Cat fit this criterion for sure. I was only able to find it and I am Otter, which I enjoyed for its simplicity. Thanks for your suggestions, Janie. -Amy

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:12:19 am

You are welcome, Amy.

Mary Boehmer

3/8/2016 08:17:39 am

Thank you for sharing with us! Books with heart:) When I read to children in the library I am always amazed at what they find in the illustrations that connect to their hearts! Your recommended list is inspiring, I will be stopping by the library to check them out today and sharing them with my classes tomorrow! Happy Reading!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:13:28 am

Mary, so happy you can share with your class.

carole calladine link

3/8/2016 08:18:00 am

Dear Janie! Love your examples of heart. It's that extra something/everything that captures the reader to read it over and over again. Thanks for sharing some of your favorites.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:14:44 am

Carole , it is so much fun to share.

Mary Worley

3/8/2016 08:19:43 am

Great choices for us—especially for layers. Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:16:02 am

You are most welcome, Mary.

joanne sher link

3/8/2016 08:24:40 am

Infinity and me was SO interesting! And I loved the POV in tooth fairy cat. Definitely wanna try it! Thanks, my friend!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:17:32 am

Hi Joanne. I like to try new things too. Happy writing.

Lindsay Hanson Metcalf

3/8/2016 08:27:22 am

I love the layers in Rabbityness. Younger audiences deserve them, too. Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:33:06 am

Lindsay, and the title knocks my socks off too!

Kathy Mazurowski

3/8/2016 08:31:19 am

Thanks Janie, you have given me a few more reasons to love pbs.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:33:47 am

Yeah, Kathy. You are welcome.

darlene koppel link

3/8/2016 08:33:04 am

I'm going to check these books out. Thank you for the analogy of heart in a story.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:34:37 am

Darlene, that quote gets me every time.

Jaclyn Kruzie link

3/8/2016 08:33:57 am

Laughter is pure magic. A story filled with humor makes me fall in love every time. Thank you Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:37:12 am

Jaclyn, me too. I wish I was better at writing "funny".

Linda Chavez

3/8/2016 08:34:47 am

What could be more important than the heart of the story? Thanks for sharing this list. Several of these are new to me.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:37:59 am

Linda, don't you love it when that happens!

Rosie Taylor

3/8/2016 08:35:13 am

You are such a gem, Janie. Looking at detail, voice, layers, questions, and humor that catch my heart are now high on my observations list. Thank you.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:38:42 am

Cool, Rosie. It is amazing what you can find in picture books.

Joan Swanson

3/8/2016 08:37:10 am

I agree, there is nothing like after a story from the heart you get this big feeling of a sigh and your mind just goes AWWWW.....

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:39:31 am

Amen. You are so right, Joan.

Ann Magee

3/8/2016 08:37:27 am

Hi Janie--you know heart is my favorite part of picture books :)
I look forward to checking out some new titles here. Thanks, girlfriend!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:40:07 am

Ann, you do pour heart into your stories.

Sharon Giltrow

3/8/2016 08:42:31 am

Thanks for your enjoyable post I liked reading all the comments that it inspired.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:40:53 am

Sharon, I love talking to everyone.

PatHaap

3/8/2016 08:44:50 am

Couldn't agree with you more!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:41:19 am

Amen, Pat.

Robin Currie link

3/8/2016 08:47:28 am

Just discovered Rabbityness - absolutely agree!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:42:09 am

It is the one I wish I wrote!

Sue Poduska

3/8/2016 08:48:26 am

Great examples. Heart is almost as hard to define as voice. Lead by example!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:42:43 am

Sue, enjoy.

Annelouise Mahoney link

3/8/2016 08:53:11 am

Janie, thank you. I also love the details, it's the innocent voice that always grabs me. Thank you for the reminder to go back and revisit those details, those precious moments that grab our hearts.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:43:57 am

Annelouise, heart is a beautiful way to connect with readers.

Monique Wakefield

3/8/2016 09:01:34 am

Thank you Janie for that wonderful post:) I need to check out Infinity and Me.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:44:27 am

Have fun Monique.

Natalie Rompella link

3/8/2016 09:11:37 am

I'm going to add Expression to the list. That illustration where you can feel the character's emotion.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:45:01 am

Good one, Natalie.

Denise Benavides

3/8/2016 09:22:41 am

The tornado threat is on the news. I really like reading your book selection that calms and touches the heart.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:45:56 am

Denise, be safe.

Christine Rodenbour

3/8/2016 09:40:23 am

Can't wait to read these stories, thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:46:45 am

Christine you are welcome.

Sherri Jones Rivers link

3/8/2016 09:41:14 am

Janie, I love the way you succinctly and from the heart captured the essence of these books. Three I have yet to get from the library, so I am making another effort to visit another library to find them. Thank you for your post.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:47:48 am

Good luck, Sherri. Love how you write with heart!

Lisa Connors link

3/8/2016 09:42:52 am

Thank you Janie. I really love the pbs with layered meaning.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:48:38 am

Lisa, what are your other favorites with layers?

Angela Turner

3/8/2016 10:05:08 am

I'm headed to the library. There were several you recommended that I haven't read. Hope my heart is ready!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:49:10 am

Angela enjoy. You are ready.

Linda Schueler

3/8/2016 10:08:55 am

These all look very intriguing. Thanks for the suggestions.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:49:58 am

Linda, you are welcome.

maria gianferrari link

3/8/2016 10:13:57 am

Thanks, Janie! Spare replies, yet full of such depth--just like picture books :)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:51:27 am

Maria pb never cease to amaze me.

Lori Dubbin

3/8/2016 10:14:15 am

Thanks, Janie, for showing us the tiny details that touch our hearts by reading and rereading picture books. There is something about shoes: as in Pete the Cat; or how about socks as in Betty Bunny Loves Chocolate Cake?!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:52:53 am

Good ones, Lori. Love Pete the Cat! Will have to check out Betty Bunny.

Lauri Meyers link

3/8/2016 10:18:18 am

Love finding the little bits within books which make your heart smile.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:53:49 am

Lauri, I agree.

Mary Jo Wagner

3/8/2016 10:21:37 am

I've often wished I was an illustrator first, author second because I so admire that talent. An illustrator often creates a story within the story with the visuals. I often "read" the art as intently as I do the words to enjoy those additional layers. Thanks for the recommendations!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:55:27 am

Mary Jo, I wish I could draw too. Picture clues are a great strategy for young readers too.

Mary Jo Wagner

3/8/2016 07:17:58 pm

They are indeed. My 11YO still spots continuity and connections in illustrations that I didn't see. In different books as well! One time she noticed the same potato in "I'm Bored" (illustrated by Debbie Ridpath Ohi) in Debbie's own book "Where are my books?"

Marlene Rohr link

3/8/2016 10:23:48 am

Thanks for this great post, Janie. My goal is for my writing to make a difference; to encourage and support people no matter what they are going through. A book I recently purchased and am sharing with my grandchildren as we walk through a difficult medical journey with a daughter is In My Heart - A Book of Feelings by Jo Witek, Illustrated by Christine Roussey.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:00:49 am

Marlene sending prayers and hugs for your daughter. Thank you for the book recommendation. I will check it out.

Marlene Rohr

3/9/2016 11:01:03 am

Thank you for your kind thoughts and prayers!

Diane Asyre

3/8/2016 10:31:28 am

That James Stevens quote is spot on as are the examples. This post makes me think about the kids in therapy venues who first learn to trust then learn more from specific book assignments. The "heart before head" logic applies to picture book readers and long after.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:06:56 am

Diane here is the entire quote: "I have learned. . .that the head does not hear anything until the heart has listened, and what the heart knows today the head will understand tomorrow." James Stevens

Alan Elliott link

3/8/2016 10:32:54 am

A number of years ago I read a story where a blob of yellow mustard dripped onto a character's shirt... and I still remember that scene. Details do matter!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:10:17 am

Alan, it is amazing what the details do for our memories.

Angie Quantrell

3/8/2016 10:43:36 am

Oh, I do love a good story that reaches out there and grabs my heart! Thanks for sharing with us, Janie.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:10:47 am

Angie, glad you enjoyed it.

Stephanie Gray

3/8/2016 10:46:53 am

Thank you for the wonderful reading list today. Most of these were new to me. One of my favorite PBs recently that had me pausing several times throughout was Toy Meets Snow. I found it to be a wonderful blend of the author's lyrical language and the illustrator's beautiful interpretation of those words.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:12:33 am

Thanks, Stephanie. I don't know that one. Writing it on my list.

Joy Main

3/8/2016 10:47:50 am

Thank you Janie for lovely suggestions. My problem is that the books that touch my heart aren't the same ones that my 4yo son wants to read. I love Say It! (Charlotte Zolotov) and The Paper Dolls (Julia Donaldson) while he's obsessed by Dirty Bertie (David Roberts) and The Disgusting Sandwich (Gareth Edwards). As an aspiring PB author I don't know which way to go!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:15:27 am

Joy, lol I have four 4-yr-old grandchildren. It is amazing how different they all can be. Three of them are triplets-two girls and a boy. The boy never wants to sit and read the girls choices. Follow your heart.

Juliana Lee link

3/8/2016 10:57:55 am

I love today's selections! Of the five, I can't find one I love more than the others. It's making me think about writing more deeply, getting to the essence of a story. Thanks so much for all the recommendations.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:17:31 am

Juliana, so happy you enjoyed the post.

Donna Cangelosi link

3/8/2016 11:00:23 am

Lovely post, Janie. Thank you for your recommendations. It's amazing how heart-felt a 32 page picture book can be.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:18:30 am

Donna it is the most amazing genre. I am learning more everyday.

Rachel Hamby link

3/8/2016 11:01:23 am

I read Rabbityness last week, and was surprised by it. Thanks for introducing me to a new book.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:19:30 am

Rachel, that surprise is golden. Glad you like it.

Therese Nagi

3/8/2016 11:04:23 am

Janie thanks for sharing five great tips! I loved the book Bird is a Bird.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:20:08 am

Therese, my pleasure.

Karen Brady link

3/8/2016 11:05:09 am

Great examples, and I love that your post was in the form of a question. "What makes your heart stop mid-beat when you are reading a story?" While some things that touch our hearts are universal, the answer really is different for everyone. This post allows us to think about what touches us individually. I think authors and illustrators can sometimes fall into the trap of trying to create something others will like. In doing so, the author's/illustrator's OWN heart is missing from the work. When we're authentic in our work, it will naturally touch others without being contrived. Thinking about and answering the question of what makes our hearts stop mid-beat, we can discover a bit more about our own heart and voice as an author/illustrator.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:21:40 am

Well said, Karen. We need to be brave and find our voices.

Meena

3/8/2016 11:06:35 am

I love the economy in the art of writing. Much needed skill in this fast-paced world. Thanks for the short and sweet suggestions.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:22:32 am

Meena you are a sweetie pie!

Sharon Constantino

3/8/2016 11:19:11 am

The stories that grab your heart are the ones retold again and again, and the ones we remember! Thanks so much for sharing Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:24:26 am

You are welcome, Sharon. Great point about the retelling.

Anna Forrester link

3/8/2016 11:20:11 am

I'd add: a great title. (RABBITYNESS?! so great!)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 11:25:05 am

I agree, Anna. That title rocks.

carrieapear@aol.com link

3/8/2016 11:25:33 am

To me, the heart, or universal connection, is what makes a book memorable.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:37:52 pm

Carrie, you are right about the universal theme.

Lydia Lukidis link

3/8/2016 11:31:45 am

Great post. We all want to infuse depth and feeling into our work, but it's sometimes not an easy task. It helps to read PBs with heart, and serves as inspiration.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:38:45 pm

Lydia the more we read the more we know.

Ali Bovis

3/8/2016 11:34:38 am

Janie, thank you so much for this amazing post. I love your James Steven quote: "I have learned. . .that the head does not hear anything until the heart has listened, and what the heart knows today the head will understand tomorrow." It's SO true! It's like magic to me, you are going about your day, reading a book, and then BAM!, in some moment- your heart fills- you get chocked up, inspired, ticked, surprised, touched... It's magic. Thanks again!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:39:44 pm

Ali I know. I love the magic.

Gabrielle Snyder link

3/8/2016 11:35:43 am

Thanks for the fantastic recommendations, Janie. I read HERE COMES THE TOOTH FAIRY CAT with my daughter a few nights ago and she immediately wanted to hear it again. Such great kid appeal (and fun for parents to read, too)!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:40:46 pm

Gabrielle, I read it to my six year old granddaughter, who just lost a tooth and she said the same thing. Lol.

christie allred link

3/8/2016 11:38:23 am

For me, it's the humor, but sometimes it's the illustrations that make me stop and really take it in :)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:43:29 pm

Christie, I love funny too. Read Wolfie by Ame Dyckman. Anything by Ame.

Melanie Ellsworth

3/8/2016 11:38:32 am

Janie - What a great question! There are always those books that are outstanding to me. Now I'll have to remember to consciously ask what it is about those books that stop my heart mid-beat.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:46:29 pm

Melanie, it is great fun to collect lines and words that grab you.

Melanie Ellsworth

3/9/2016 09:20:15 am

Absolutely!

Brook Gideon link

3/8/2016 11:44:06 am

Janie,
Thank you for a wonderful post on what makes readers love picture books or a particular story. It's important to remember.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 12:47:02 pm

You are welcome, Brook.

Lynn Alpert link

3/8/2016 11:48:17 am

As I child, I loved pouring over picture books in which I would discover something new every time I read it. As an illustrator, I love adding in those extra dimensions.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:23:11 pm

Lynn, lucky you. I wish I could draw. There is an old book that I love, called Something from Nothing by Phoebe Gilman. There is a family of mice under the floor boards that have another whole story going on besides the main story text. Keep adding those extra dimensions.

Nancy Rimar

3/8/2016 11:57:59 am

Humor is what does it for me in the text and the illustrations.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:28:28 pm

Nancy read books by Ame Dyckman. Wolfe is one of my favorites.

Nancy Rimar

3/9/2016 10:24:38 am

Janie - I've read Wolfie (and love it) but I'll definitely look at her other books.

Maria Johnson

3/8/2016 12:09:27 pm

There is something so grounding about the detail of the red shoes,as you pointed out, in Infinity and Me, especially sweet heart tug when it comes up full circle at the ending, while meanwhile the main topic really sends one's head soaring to infinity.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:29:21 pm

Maria, head over heels.

JEN link

3/8/2016 12:14:02 pm

What makes my heart stop is those unexpected twists. I love to be surprised and with each new picture book I research it gets harder to be surprised.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:31:00 pm

Jen, can you imagine the agents and editors looking for surprises ? We have to write to surprise.

JEN link

3/9/2016 10:45:19 am

Exactly! But when I write it kind of feels like I'm trying to tickle myself. Not an easy task, is it?

debbie mccue

3/8/2016 12:18:57 pm

Great way to explore what melts my heart in the books I love, Janie. I'm enjoying your recommended reads too. Thanks!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:32:02 pm

Debbie, so glad you are enjoying the books.

Sydney O'Neill

3/8/2016 12:26:12 pm

“The head does not hear…until the heart has listened…” ~James Stevens
This is so true. Thank you for the recommendations, Janie.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:32:36 pm

My pleasure, Sydney.

Brenda Huante

3/8/2016 12:43:36 pm

Thank you for the list. I love to find those gems that speak to the heart!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:33:07 pm

Brenda, do you have any favorites?

Michele Manning

3/8/2016 12:52:02 pm

"The head does not hear…until the heart has listened…” ~James Stevens. Now I will ask myself what is my heart hearing when I read these books. I've added it to my Mentor Text worksheet. Thanks!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:34:10 pm

Michele, isn't it amazing how we can pick picture books apart!

Laurie Bouck

3/8/2016 12:52:34 pm

Thank you this insightful post. My favorites are those with humor, but a big old lump in my throat (in a good sense!! lol) will do it for me, too. :)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:37:28 pm

Laurie, I agree about a lump in your throat. I can't read Munch's I'll Love You Forever without tearing up.

Bev Baird

3/8/2016 12:56:25 pm

That first quote by Stevens says it all. We have to engage our hearts first. Wonderful choices for mentor texts. Thanks Janie

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:38:50 pm

Bev, you are most welcome. I agree, write from the heart.

Jennifer Cole Judd link

3/8/2016 12:59:26 pm

Lovely list, Janie! Can't wait to read Rabbityness, especially--anxious to know what the "layers" are! :)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:39:33 pm

Jennifer let me know what you think after you read the book.

Charlotte Dixon

3/8/2016 01:40:11 pm

Thank you, Janie, for sharing the elements of a good story. I haven't read all of these books so I have some thoughtful reading ahead of me. I recently read CATCHING THE MOON by Crystal Hubbard and I reread the book over and over. Her lyrical words sing of the magic in the human heart. Happy ReFoReMo post Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:41:16 pm

Hi Charlotte. Just wrote that one on my list. Love getting new titles. Thank you.

Ellen Leventhal

3/8/2016 01:45:26 pm

I love James Stevens's quote. Sometimes that makes PB writing really hard. When we have so few words to work with, sometimes I feel like I revise the heart out of my stories. Such an important post! Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:43:51 pm

Ellen, it is such a balancing act. It's like poetry--just enough.

Tracey Brown

3/8/2016 01:46:06 pm

Thanks Janie for your post. A reminder of why PB's are so amazing!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:44:44 pm

Tracey you are welcome. I always get so excited going to the library.

Dee Leone link

3/8/2016 01:46:51 pm

What a great list in regard to what to love about a story! Awesome giveaway, too! Thanks, Janie.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:45:18 pm

Dee hope you win!

Laura Renauld

3/8/2016 01:47:57 pm

"Heart" is one of those intangible elements in writing. Thank you for the examples!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:46:03 pm

Laura you are welcome. We all have to write with passion.

Carla Ketner

3/8/2016 01:48:13 pm

The Tooth Fairy Cat always makes me smile. I look forward to reading the others.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:49:09 pm

Carla have you read the other books in the series? Here Comes the Easter Cat, Here Comes Santa Cat. . .

Carla Ketner

3/9/2016 11:03:37 am

I have. They're all great!

Denise Engle

3/8/2016 02:01:15 pm

Sometimes it is just a word, a tiny surprise that makes me stop and nod at the brilliance of it all! A simple little word, or a hidden object in an illustration that suddenly jumps out at me. This is the heart of the book for me. Thanks for reminding us of the heart of children's literature!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:50:00 pm

Denise what are some of your favorites?

Denise Engle

3/9/2016 07:40:43 am

I love the letters splashing off the page in The Fantastic Flying Books of Mr. Morris Lessmore! And, I love the three toys on adventure page after page in Toys Meet Snow by Emily Jenkins and Paul O. Zelinsky!

Ashley Bankhead

3/8/2016 02:03:31 pm

Thanks for this post, and for the list of mentor texts.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 05:50:24 pm

Ashley you are most welcome.

Melissa Rutigliano

3/8/2016 02:11:31 pm

Janie, since you bring humor nicely into Reformo, I have to say that has been one of the things I'm enjoying most from all these books these past weeks. I love the comedy portion of children's PBs! Sometimes they are found in the art, sometimes the text. But they are always just so dang cute :) Also, I wanted to point out how much Rabbityness does is so few words; inspires creativity, encourages individuality, touches on society and conforming, deals with coping with loss, and how someone with courage and impact and self expression can leave so much of themselves to others after they have gone! All that in a picture book!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:16:20 pm

Melissa, I just counted and Rabbityness is a hopping 160 words! What?That is amazing.

Lauren Kerstein link

3/8/2016 02:22:10 pm

Thank you for your thought-provoking post!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:16:46 pm

My pleasure, Lauren.

Heidi Yates

3/8/2016 02:23:31 pm

Thank you for sharing some wonderful books with us today Janie. I especially loved the humor in The Tooth Fairy Cat. :)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:17:40 pm

Heidi, my granddaughter loved it too. She had just lost a tooth.

Sandra Jenkins

3/8/2016 02:23:37 pm

Ready to dive into your list and be inspired!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:18:10 pm

Sandra, have so much fun!

Heather Pierce Stigall link

3/8/2016 02:28:37 pm

I love stories with heart and find it so interesting to find just what element does it. Thanks for the recommendations -- many of these are new to me!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:18:40 pm

Heather, happy reading!

Bethany Roberts link

3/8/2016 02:40:05 pm

Thanks so much for this post. Much to think about here! I love laugh-out-loud books- and especially love laughing over them with our three grandkids- a bonding experience for sure! But I also love books that are serious, such as Eve Bunting's Yard Sale. Told in first person, it perfectly captures a child's voice and her feelings about moving, with well-chosen details.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:19:57 pm

Bethany reading with grandkids is the best! I love Yard Sale.

Annette Bay Pimentel link

3/8/2016 02:46:49 pm

Thanks for the reminder to look for the unexpected in illustrations. I love the unexpected in text, too. I think that was what made The Gift of Nothing (from yesterday's list) so wonderful--that funny twisted meaning of "nothing."

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:20:59 pm

Annette, I have to read that one. Looking forward to it.

Lynn Davidson link

3/8/2016 02:47:27 pm

My favourite of the four I've read in this group of books is I Am Otter. So adorable. I think it's the innocence that speaks to me most, too.
Thank you for sharing from your experience.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:21:50 pm

Lynn, Sam is in ReFoReMo. Go say hello.

Lynn Davidson link

3/9/2016 11:53:54 am

Thanks Janie, for reminding me I can do that. :) I will.

I had been in touch with Sam when I bought his first book - I Am Otter - and reviewed it on my blog. I also have tweeted with Otter - and that's pretty cool, you know.
Isn't technology amazing?

Sue Ganz-Schmitt link

3/8/2016 02:52:59 pm

Thank you Janie! When my heart leaves me for a moment and leaps into a story then leaps right back into me with the emotional moment is a picture book I will cherish for ever.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:26:24 pm

Sue, certain picture books are like magic. Two of my adult daughters sat down and read a copy of the Lonely Doll by Dare White. They loved that book when they were little. It was so much fun to see how excited they were to read it again.

Sheri Radovich

3/8/2016 02:58:47 pm

I loved the Rabbityness story and I am Otter. Yes, they have a lot of fun and heart.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:27:24 pm

Sheri, I own both of those books.

Anne Appert link

3/8/2016 03:33:24 pm

I love seeing the fun surprises an illustrator adds that support the story, especially if they are humorous, but even when they are not. Thank you for your post!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:29:07 pm

Anne, you are welcome. I keep saying it--wish I could draw!

Lori Gravley link

3/8/2016 03:34:02 pm

What a sweet post. I hadn't seen these books on any other lists, so they are all new to me and I love them. Thank you.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:29:36 pm

Lori so excited for you to read them.

Jarm Del Boccio link

3/8/2016 03:35:12 pm

I love your simple observations, Janie. Good set of books. . .and I've never read them before. Double kudos!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:30:16 pm

Jarm enjoy the stories and let me know what you think.

Susan Deo

3/8/2016 03:37:47 pm

Janie, Thanks for all the heart and soul you put into your post! I agree there are certain books, certain lines or illustrations that touch our hearts. What an amazing array of stories and ideas you have presented. I's still thinking about the three I have been able to read so far.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:31:25 pm

Susan, it is awesome to have a story stay with us for days! Enjoy the rest.

Kristi Veitenheimer link

3/8/2016 03:39:57 pm

Great list of new books for me to check out! Thanks, Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:34:35 pm

Hi Kristi, Happy reading!

Maria Marshall

3/8/2016 03:49:59 pm

Excellent, thought provoking post. Rabbityness & Infinity were new books for me. I really enjoyed them. I find I connect most with books that touch my heart. Thanks.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:35:36 pm

Maria, happy you enjoyed the books.

Lenne' Musarra

3/8/2016 04:29:41 pm

I love and identify with the many hats you've worn, Janie. Serving others, using the talents we've been given and developed, definitely softens hearts, opens perspective, joy and possibility. I love PBs for their simplicity, succinctness and profound ability to touch and stir hearts, with every reading. And it is the details, voice, layers of meaning, questions answered and the humor that draw us in every time. Thank you. I'm looking forward to reading your books!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:39:12 pm

Lenne love your idea of stirring hearts! Let me know what you think of the books.

Naana

3/8/2016 04:36:16 pm

Salient points, Janie

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:42:49 pm

Naana, thank you.

Tanya Konerman link

3/8/2016 04:45:48 pm

I always love the humor!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:44:14 pm

Tanya what is your favorite humorous pb?

Joana Pastro

3/8/2016 05:06:59 pm

Thanks, Janie for the amazing list of books. I love stories with a twist, a surprise along the way. Great sense of humor is also top on my list.
Figuring out the heart in our stories is a big challenge. I'm struggling with that right now. I have this idea that I love but I'm not exactly sure what path to take in order to make it shine. Gotta keep working!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:46:21 pm

Joana, the more we read and discuss the clearer the path. Good luck and happy writing.

Joana Pastro

3/9/2016 10:40:51 am

Thanks, Janie!

Ginger Weddle

3/8/2016 05:36:22 pm

Janie, Your post clearly touched a nerve (or our hearts) based on all of the comments! I'm looking forward to exploring some new to me PB you mentioned and learning about "rabbityness"! 😊

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:47:20 pm

Ginger let me know what you think of Rabbityness. It only has 160 words. Wow!

Judy Cooper link

3/8/2016 05:56:36 pm

Thank you so much for this list. All these books are new to me. Here Comes the Tooth Fairy Cat is one of the most brilliant pb's I've ever seen. Absolutely hysterical! Love the different voice of the story and how the illustrations carried so much of it. The message of inspiring creativity in Rabbittyness has been my mission for years with the arts enrichment classes I have taught to young children and my posts on www.funartprofessor.com. (Need to do more posts on it - woefully behind) Infinity and Me is absolutely beautiful. Gorgeous illustrations and very thoughtful narrative.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:51:59 pm

Judy, we need the arts. Thank you for your mission.

“If I had but two loaves of bread, I would sell one and buy hyacinths, for they would feed my soul.” ~Mohammad

― Mohammad

Melissa Stoller link

3/8/2016 05:57:38 pm

Thank you, Janie, for these excellent book choices and helpful comments! Making connections with readers is what it is all about.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:52:48 pm

Melissa, those connections help make life long learners.

Susan Wroble link

3/8/2016 06:02:50 pm

Great list! Years ago, I had plans for a picture book about infinity that I put aside -- I loved Kate Hosford's treatment, linking to forever.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 06:53:50 pm

Susan glad you liked the list. Do you have a favorite pb?

Elizabeth Duncan link

3/8/2016 06:21:40 pm

I thought the focus on one detail that touches the heart was fascinating and important. The creation of a picture book is complex-- and how one finds that perfect, unique detail for each book is what we all should be striving toward.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:26:37 pm

Elizabeth, I think we get closer to finding that unique detail by reading all the pb we can get our hands on.

Rita Lorraine Hubbard link

3/8/2016 06:38:33 pm

Hi Janie, great post! Brief and to the point. :) Thanks for the list.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:27:15 pm

You are most welcome, Rita.

Linda Kujawski link

3/8/2016 06:40:39 pm

Janie, great suggestions. This post made me smile! Thank you.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:27:48 pm

Yeah for the smile, Linda. Happy reading.

Jane Buttery link

3/8/2016 07:10:27 pm

As a grandmother who has a strong faith your quote of James Stevens was wonderful; it touched me also because the name is the sameas my grandfather and my middle name is Stevens! I know that's beside the point but itwa serendipitous for me. I enjoyed th Infinity book particularly at the end. I must try getting the others you mention I have laughed at the wonderful surprise in It's NOT a good idea and like the way your focus makes us more aware as we write and read. Thank you for the encouragement.Blessings, Janie from Jane

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:34:57 pm

Jane, how lovely we share a name too! Here is the whole quote:
"I have learned. . .that the head does not hear anything until the heart has listened, and what the heart knows today the head will understand tomorrow." Many blessings to you too!

Caroline Webster link

3/8/2016 07:17:09 pm

I love how you've distilled heart power down to these five elements. They all resonate with me. I am new to Infinity and Me, and I just love this book. My younger son has always loved "infinity." He says it's his favorite number :-). The story and illustrations in this book really speak to me. With 13 grandkids, I imagine you appreciate the role the grandmother plays :-). Humor is something I appreciate but struggle with as a writer. You've given me inspiration to have these elements as signposts when I write. Happy reading! Nice to meet you here.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:36:39 pm

Caroline, Great to meet you as well. I love learning things together. ReFoReMo family rocks!

Noelle McBride

3/8/2016 07:21:23 pm

Thank you for sharing these love-ly books! I find I notice more of the "heart" of the book when it's read aloud and not only see the rich illustrations but hear the sound of the words.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:38:12 pm

Noelle, excellent point. It is so important to hold our children/grandchildren in our laps and read out loud to them.

Susan Zonca

3/8/2016 07:29:51 pm

Lovely quote to start us on our heartfelt journey through these mentor texts. What a fine array of picture books. A good reminder to be in tune with my own heart and let it flow into my stories.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:49:11 pm

Susan, I love what you said, "A good reminder to be in tune with my own heart and let it flow into my stories. " Happy writing.

Cathy Breisacher

3/8/2016 07:33:12 pm

I love when my heart is moved after reading a story and then the story stays with me for a while. Humor always touches me. I like that you mentioned the voice of innocence. I never thought of that before, but that is a special quality of stand-out books. Many thanks for sharing!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 07:50:00 pm

Cathy, so glad you enjoyed the post.

Martin Segal

3/8/2016 08:38:19 pm

Thanks for the great list, Janie! I can't wait to read a few of these tonight!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 08:45:12 pm

Happy reading, Martin.

Linda Carpenter link

3/8/2016 08:56:59 pm

Janie,
Many thanks for the great post. You are an inspiration and one busy lady!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 09:02:38 pm

Linda, you are welcome. What a joy to have grandchildren. I am blessed. (Like I need another excuse to read pb. lol)

Mary Warth

3/8/2016 09:14:06 pm

Thanks Janie! I would add unforgettable characters who tug at the heart as well.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:01:58 pm

Mary, good call. I agree.

Valarie Giogas

3/8/2016 09:28:35 pm

LOVE the opening quote. I may have to post that near my computer. Thanks for sharing.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:03:14 pm

Valarie did you see the entire quote? "I have learned. . .that the head does not hear anything until the heart has listened, and what the heart knows today the head will understand tomorrow."

Traci Bold link

3/8/2016 09:33:50 pm

What I find most interesting while looking for the heart of the book is hearing what children take away from the book. Possibly what the author intended is not at all what the reader got out of it. I really enjoyed your list and your thoughts of what was most important of each book you listed. Found it quite interesting. Thank you for sharing it with us Janie. :)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:03:59 pm

My pleasure, Traci.

Charlene Steadman

3/8/2016 10:23:17 pm

I, too, enjoy hearing all the different thoughts about books. I have reread some of the books to help me broaden my viewpoint.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:34:00 pm

Charlene, keep up the great work!

Celeste Gerard

3/8/2016 09:42:14 pm

Such wonderful books! I was so touched by Rabbityness....so sweet. My friends mom just died, and I think she will love this book. Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:05:26 pm

Celeste, I just love when books can offer comfort. Sorry for your friend's loss.

Celeste Gerard

3/9/2016 06:57:25 pm

Thank you

Leah Heilman Schanke

3/8/2016 09:46:40 pm

I loved Otter! So heartwarming and humorous at the same time. Heartwarming I can do. Adding humor is something I would like to do.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:06:36 pm

Leah, I would love to do that too! Sam, the author of Otter is part of ReFoReMo. Woohoo.

Jena Benton

3/8/2016 09:51:53 pm

What an interesting collection of books! The voice of innocence and layers of meaning indeed! Thank you for sharing.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:07:06 pm

Jena, so glad you liked the list.

DeLeon

3/8/2016 10:20:05 pm

I still have not been able to get all of the books yet, but, I enjoyed reading both: I am Otter and Rabbityness. I am waiting for the other three to arrive, but, with these two examples, I was able to get inspired. Great choices. Thank you, Janie. I can't wait to read the other three and get today's prize, hehe ;-)

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:28:07 pm

DeLeon, hope you win! Yeah for inspiration!

Lisa Morgan

3/8/2016 10:20:44 pm

Thank you for such unique books. They are very tender. I especially enjoyed Infinity and Me. I love the relationship with child and Grandmother.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:29:05 pm

Lisa so happy you liked the selection.

Sherry Howard link

3/8/2016 10:22:42 pm

Yes! Layers, details, and beautiful ideas. All of those things together make wonderful books. I just saw Zootopia and kept thinking of the layers in that movie and the word choices. Even though a movie, it has a lot to teach a picture book writer. And the winner today will love the book Writing Picture Books!

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:30:33 pm

Sherry, sounds like a great movie--layers and word choice!

Pamela Courtney

3/8/2016 10:24:39 pm

This post to me back to the first time I read, The Giving Tree to a group of summer campers. When I finished reading the story, there were actually tears from campers as young as five years old. They got it. It sparked such a conversation about kindness, love, selfishness, sadness, etc. Isn't that just we want a story to do? I want to do that with my writing. Oh thank you so much for this.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:31:52 pm

Hi Pamela, Kids are smart and get it. I want to write like that too!

Trine

3/8/2016 10:24:45 pm

Ahh...red shoes...
Yes, as Traci Bold reminds us above: Kids seem to find the heartbeat of a story sometimes in ways we do not expect. They are so much fun to write for.
PS I found the Tooth Fairy Cat to be hilarious.

Janie Reinart

3/8/2016 10:33:03 pm

Trine, what other picture books make you laugh?

Natalie Lynn Tanner

3/8/2016 10:34:55 pm

Janie: Your brief message today SPEAKS VOLUMES!!!! THANK YOU!!!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:07:22 am

You are most welcome, Natalie.

Sandy Perlic

3/8/2016 10:44:03 pm

All great elements of some of the most memorable picture books! Off to walk in your footsteps and see if I appreciate the same things in these recommended books that you do...

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:08:13 am

Cool Sandy. Let me know what you think about the selections.

dfrybarger

3/8/2016 10:50:07 pm

Great recommendations, Janie. I haven't read any of these but on my way ro get them. Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:09:03 am

dfrybarger, It's like going into a candy store!

Susie Sawyer link

3/8/2016 11:05:30 pm

Looking forward to reading these recommendations!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:09:25 am

Susie, have so much fun!

Nancy Ramsey

3/8/2016 11:08:39 pm

Great question! Wonderful mentor texts to highlight your answers. Thank you for this post :)

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:10:00 am

You're welcome, Nancy.

lilli

3/8/2016 11:17:45 pm

I like how "the heart of it all" is like a sort of "I don't know what" that a book either has or does not have. Also, I'm sure some people might think that a particular book has heart while others do not think so. Thank you for including such a varied selection of books for this post. They have such different styles and such different approaches to telling the stories. The art also covered such a wide range... beautiful stuff! Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:11:19 am

lilli, so many choices, so little time. Enjoy.

Carol Cole link

3/8/2016 11:23:42 pm

I love the twists at the end of "Here Comes the Tooth Fairy Cat" and "I am Otter". The first one is delightful and the second one is so subtle but cute. I too have problems finding the heart of some of my stories. These mentor texts are very helpful.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:12:15 am

Glad you like them, Carol.

Keila Dawson link

3/8/2016 11:36:17 pm

Ah yes, although to each is own, some books grab me right away. Those are the ones that touch my soul. Although who doesn't like a good laugh and Cat makes me laugh out loud!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:15:37 am

Hi Keila, What other books make you laugh out loud? Please check out Keila's King Cake Baby. I love it!
"No, mon ami! You can't catch me!" So brags the runaway in this New Orleans adaptation of "The Gingerbread Man".

Carol Nelson

3/9/2016 12:25:52 am

I love getting these lists of books. So far I've enjoyed "Here Comes the Tooth Fairy Cat and Rabbityness. Two others are waiting for me at the library. Thanks for introducing me to these great mentor texts.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:20:00 am

Carol, my list keeps getting longer too!

Jilanne Hoffmann

3/9/2016 02:17:11 am

Layers, voice, details, answers, humor. Yes, all of these things. So true. Thank you, Janie, for naming them.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:20:57 am

Jilanne who could imagine all these elements and more are packed into a pb?

Lisa Billa

3/9/2016 02:57:23 am

Thank you for the wonderful selections, and I love this quote! I'm adding to my goals for the month- identify and keep track of what really speaks to my heart in each book.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:22:30 am

Lisa that sounds great. Sometimes, I read a pb and it doesn't do anything for me. I do respond better to pb with heart.

Donna L Martin link

3/9/2016 05:51:06 am

I agree with you and Mr Stevens. If a book doesn't tug at my heart at some level ai find it hard to get into the story.

Nice reminder post that reading involves so much more than just looking at the words!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:23:37 am

Love what you said, "reading involves so much more than just looking at the words!"

Megan Taraszkiewicz

3/9/2016 07:23:42 am

Thank you so much for this great book selection! I really enjoy books with heart, especially those with heart and humor like I Am Otter.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:24:58 am

Megan, I love Sam's books. I could be in a fan club. Genius that Otter starts a toast restaurant. lol

Nina

3/9/2016 07:37:39 am

This is so inspiring to think about what makes a great song moment in a picture book. I've thought of a story while reading your post. Thank you.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:26:08 am

Nina, hurrah! Love when those story ideas pop in.

Karen Condit

3/9/2016 08:07:39 am

Thanks for these titles. When I think of the voice of innocence, The Hello, Goodbye Window, by Norton Juster and Chris Rashchka also comes to mind. A story of a relationship between a little girl and her grandparents, played out through the simple joys of childhood and Nanna and Poppy's kitchen window. (Caldecott Award 2005)

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:27:31 am

Karen, adding that title to my list. Thank you.

Holly Samson Hall

3/9/2016 09:06:02 am

For me, it's poignancy and humor. The stories that stick with me are the ones that touch my emotions in some way, or make me smile to myself, even when I'm reading silently.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:28:51 am

Holly I tend to gravitate to those themes too.

Virginia Law Manning link

3/9/2016 09:46:46 am

Thank you, Janie! I loved this collection of books as they were so different from each other. Sometimes a well played sound effect can bring me in a story--make me feel like I'm right there.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:31:24 am

Virginia, the sense of smell too--like the smell of play dough, or cut grass. Here is a quote from Helen Keller:
"Smell is a potent wizard that transports you across thousand of miles and all the years you have lived."

AJ Irving link

3/9/2016 09:58:01 am

Nice mixture of mentor texts. You included a few I haven't read read. I'm waiting for my holds at the library to come in :). Thank you, Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:32:19 am

AJ happy you have some new ones to explore.

Bruna de Luca

3/9/2016 11:07:49 am

What a thought-provoking list. If only I could write a PB that included them all ; )

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 11:19:25 am

Bruna, I am wanting to write the same thing too.

Kathy Mazurowski

3/9/2016 11:47:01 am

Off to the library! Thanks Janie, for your insight.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 02:10:24 pm

Kathy, have fun. I don't leave home without my library card.

Sadee Schilling link

3/9/2016 12:39:51 pm

Oooh, RABBITYNESS looks extra good. Thanks for the reading list, Janie. Can't wait to read them all!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 02:11:09 pm

Sadee, that book knocked my socks off! Let me know what you think.

Alice Fulgione

3/9/2016 01:03:24 pm

I have read two of the suggested books and I'm looking forward to reading the others. Thanks for the post!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 02:11:57 pm

Alice, you are welcome. I get so excited to see all the new titles. My list keeps growing.

MD Knabb

3/9/2016 02:19:15 pm

Terrific examples do that "aaaah" factor. Anne's book is the best go-to-guide for writing PBs. Thanks, Janie.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 05:23:39 pm

MD you are welcome.

Chana Stiefel link

3/9/2016 02:29:53 pm

Wonderful list! Still waiting for my library to track some of these titles down. I'm amazed that you've responded to every comment. So kind and generous! There is no community like the kidlit community. Thank you for sharing!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 05:28:07 pm

Chana, I appreciate all of you and know that we can learn from each other. I am so happy to have this opportunity to connect thanks to Carrie and Kirstine. Thank you for your comments too!

Sue Heavenrich

3/9/2016 02:48:17 pm

short & sweet ... and to the point. What a great collection of books to make us think about heart. I think what I liked about Rabbityness was the wonderful splashy paint.
I already have a copy of Ann's book, so you don't need to put my name in the drawing.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 05:39:26 pm

HI Sue, I agree the art is spectacular. I love everything about Rabbityness.

Colleen Paeff link

3/9/2016 03:21:36 pm

Thanks, Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 05:39:50 pm

Colleen, my pleasure.

Suzanne Poulter Harris

3/9/2016 04:49:03 pm

Like you, Janie, I love stories with layers. And great page turns!

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 05:42:12 pm

Suzanne, what are some books with your favorite page turns? Where the Wild Things Are is another one of mine. Especially all the double page spreads without text.

sue twiggs

3/9/2016 04:49:25 pm

Janie,
I will definitely read these books. I am behind and loving every book I read.My two favorites for tugging on my heart so far are beekle by Santat and Ask Me. I plan on giving my sons a copy of the latter book for Father's day to read to their daughters. i love the quote by stevens in one of the comments.
I have the Paul book and it is my go to on PB how -to books.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 05:45:03 pm

Sue, I love giving books to my grandchildren too! You can never have too many books.

Kimberly Marcus link

3/9/2016 06:46:32 pm

Brief and spot on!
Thank you.

Janie Reinart

3/9/2016 10:59:34 pm

Kimberly, My pleasure. Happy reading.

Amanda Sincavage

3/9/2016 11:33:52 pm

“All that Rabbit had left was a hole…a deep dark hole.” -- Wow! I assumed the story was about being true to yourself so this line blew me away! Thanks Janie.

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 10:36:16 am

Amanda, it is a book I own! The other line that grabbed me was:"This made them think of Rabbit, which made them happy. I so want to write a picture book that will help my grandchildren think of me when I am gone.

Carol Cole link

3/9/2016 11:41:21 pm

I'm confused - this is the same post as yesterday. Will there be a post for March 9?
I've read all the books for Day 9.

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 10:37:18 am

Carol, we had a little glitch. I believe it is fixed now. Sorry for the inconvenience,

Emily J

3/10/2016 12:11:36 am

Thank you so much for this post, Janie!

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 11:14:26 am

Emily, you are most welcome.

Juli Caveny link

3/10/2016 12:52:20 am

Rabbityness looks like a book that I'm going to have to search and find! (I love deep and layered meanings!)

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 11:23:13 am

Juli you won't be disappointed!

Shellley Marshall

3/10/2016 03:25:10 am

Janie, the message in your post is so very helpful to me as I decide which idea to start writing about. I ask myself "Which one touches my heart." I'd also like to point out that the fact that you take the time to reply to everyone's comment in this post is "heart-warming" in it's own right. Thank you.

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 11:27:11 am

Shellley that is so sweet of you to say. You are welcome. Happy writing.

Karen Bell

3/10/2016 09:42:12 am

Thank you Janie for you post about heart and surprise in a picture book. One of the books I have "read" during reforemo that has a lot of heart and surprise is "Flora and the Flamingo". Off to read your list.

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 11:31:22 am

Thanks, Karen. I like Flora too!

Nadine Gamble

3/10/2016 10:28:08 am

Thank you for reminding us to strive for our best work, so that one day we can inspire others.

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 11:32:21 am

Nadine, I am hoping to inspire my grandkids! Happy writing.

Cecilia

3/10/2016 11:21:43 am

Finally got a copy of Rabittyness. Such a touching and delightful tale. Thanks for your suggestions.

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 11:34:20 am

Cecilia, To me it is the perfect mix of text and illustrations and heart. I want to write like that!

Lotus Ivak link

3/10/2016 07:49:56 pm

Thank you so much for your amazing thoughts on this Janie! I just finished reading the books (except "I am Otter" which is not there in my library). It was interesting to observe that the PB "Here comes the tooth fairy cat" was much longer than usual PB length of around 32 pages. Is that something the publisher decides based on the story?

Janie Reinart

3/10/2016 10:58:11 pm

Hi Lotus, It is indeed up to the publisher. I think expanding the pages is done more often with nonfiction pb biographies. My sense is that generally the 32 page length is the norm for fiction pb.

Anne

3/11/2016 03:14:02 am

Ah, the 'heart-stop' when you know you are in the hands of a master. How to get it in one's own stories...

Janie Reinart

3/11/2016 11:05:36 am

Anne, I like to type out the manuscripts of books that make my heart stop. It lets us look at the words from a different angle. The more we read and write helps us get closer to being a master. Happy writing.

Angela De Groot

3/11/2016 12:45:15 pm

Thanks, Janie. Anne Whitford Paul's book is brilliant - definitely one of my go-to's. Thanks to Katelyn Aronson, too - I'll be requesting the Mermaid and the Shoe from the library.

Janie Reinart

3/11/2016 04:12:01 pm

Hi Angela, I requested the mermaid book too. Happy reading and writing.

Ashley Pierson

3/11/2016 05:07:08 pm

Thanks, Janie! Wonderful post that really got me thinking and inspired!! Anne Whitford Paul's book is a treasure.

Janie Reinart

3/11/2016 05:48:15 pm

Ashley, you are so welcome!

Claire Noland link

3/12/2016 12:35:37 pm

I love that you summed the heart of each book in one word. Lovely!

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:03:12 am

Claire, thank you. Happy reading.

Helen Dening link

3/12/2016 04:22:15 pm

I just read Rabbityness to a Homeschooled group. Wow! Their hearts were touched. Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:04:39 am

Helen, How old was the group? What were some of their comments? Would love to hear. So happy the children liked the story.

Marilyn Garcia

3/12/2016 05:16:46 pm

These are all new titles to me - haven't read a single one yet. I'm impressed that you could distill what makes your heart stop about each of these with one word. Sometimes I don't know why my heart stops, I just feel that it does and my whole body melts a little and I don't want the book to be over so soon. I'm thinking about "Waiting" and "The Hello Good-Bye Window".

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:06:40 am

Marilyn, I just ordered the Hello Good-Bye window. Anxious to read it too. Try typing out the words from the books that grab you. Might help to figure out why the book appeals to you.

Kristen Browning

3/12/2016 11:45:41 pm

Thanks for the great book selections. I enjoyed Infinity and Me--the voice was true to me. It's fascinating that children go around contemplating and trying to figure out such big ideas, yet are also very focused on small things, like the red shoes. I love that PBs can help children better understand ideas both big and small. I also love all of the CAT books. They crack up my daughter and me :)

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:07:43 am

Kristen, you hit the nail on the head. That child like contemplating is the universal truth in the story.

Susie Sawyer link

3/13/2016 11:55:51 pm

Thank you Maria! Great advice, to "read what you don't write." And congratulations on your success with Penny and Jelly!

Susie Sawyer link

3/13/2016 11:59:12 pm

Oops!! Sorry, Janie! I already posted properly on your thread, and now I've accidentally posted my "Day 9" post here too! This is my "catch up day", and I clearly need to be more careful about placing my posts. Thank you again! :)

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:08:18 am

No worries. Have fun reading.

Cindy Cornwall

3/14/2016 11:34:25 am

My faves are Rabbityness and Infinity and Me. Loved the way Jo Empson has an important message, but it's not didactic. And the illustrations capture the essence of a rabbit. Infinity and Me is just amazing the way the illustrator was able to represent abstract thoughts. (Not to mention the touching quality of the text). Could go on.....

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 03:24:26 pm

Cindy, So glad you enjoyed them.

Anne-Marie Strohnan

3/14/2016 05:49:24 pm

Thank you for drawing our attention to the wide range of elements that lead to feeling.

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:19:48 pm

We want to write and strike a chord. Stories are the best way to learn about feelings.

Linda Hofke

3/14/2016 07:51:46 pm

I like all kinds of books--fiction, nonfiction, quiet books, mysteries, fantasy, quirky, character-driven-- but incorporate a bit of humor into it, too, and I am sold.

Janie Reinart

3/14/2016 10:20:34 pm

Linda, nothing better than to hear giggles as you read a story out loud.

Wendy Greenleywbgreenley@gmail.com

3/15/2016 09:10:30 pm

Hi Janie! Thanks for the <3 post! (I already have a copy of Ann Whitford Paul's book so share it with someone else :) )

Janie Reinart

3/15/2016 10:34:25 pm

You are most welcome, Wendy.

Shari Della Penna link

3/16/2016 04:47:18 pm

Thnaks, Janie! I love your choices. How about an oldie but goodie: The Runaway Bunny by Margaret Wise Brown. One of my all time favorites. The last page always makes me say "Aww."

Janie Reinart

3/17/2016 11:57:53 am

Shari, good one to add. Just saying "bunny" makes me smile.

L. Michelle Quraishi link

3/16/2016 10:33:40 pm

I'm so impressed with the way Deborah Underwood comes up with creative new storylines for her Cat character!

Janie Reinart

3/17/2016 11:59:50 am

L.Michelle, I agree. Wish we would have thought of it! And the humor in each one gives my grandkids the giggles.

Jane link

3/17/2016 12:44:25 am

I have now read Infinity. I love the stars and I love math andmmusic so I found the author;s exploration og the topic intriguing. I also thought of whatGod told Abraham- his descendants would be as numerous as the stars in the heavens. The book saw the glory of Infinity and will make children think.
On adifferent level I am Otter was great fun. Thank you for the suggestions. I would like to promote a book called Wishes by Canadian Jean Little ,a blind author(I've met) of more than 50 books now, a wonderful ladyand wishes pub in 2012 is beautifully illustrated by Genieve Cote. "If wishes were horses, then poor people could rideIf wishes were friendships, I'd be by your side."

Janie Reinart

3/17/2016 12:02:03 pm

Jane, so happy you enjoyed Infinity. I will check out Wishes. Thank you for the title.

Myrna Foster

3/17/2016 03:13:46 am

I love all of these things, too, and I admire the way you made your points with brevity. I haven't read any of your examples but I AM OTTER, so I'm excited to discover the ones that are new to me.

Janie Reinart

3/17/2016 12:03:15 pm

Myrna, new books are like candy. Can't get enough! I have a new batch of books to pick up at the library and am giddy with anticipation. Lol

Suzy Leopold

3/19/2016 10:38:14 pm

Detail, voice, layers, questions, or humor are definitely found in outstanding picture books that warm the reader's heart. Thank you, Janie.

Gabrielle Schoeffield

3/20/2016 09:35:04 am

short and sweet with a twist....love it and find it challenging!
Thanks so much for your insights!
Gabrielle

Janie Reinart

3/20/2016 10:23:45 am

Gabrielle, I know, I want to write like this. Great summary-short+sweet+ twist!

Lisa Williams

3/20/2016 12:25:36 pm

I love the role that the color red plays in the books Grandpa Green by Lane Smith and also in Journey by Aaron Becker. That one detail really draws my attention for these two books. Thanks for the great post. I love the quote that starts out the post! Thank you for writing for us!

Janie Reinart

3/20/2016 09:08:18 pm

Lisa, Glad you liked the post. The details make the story. Did you see the entire quote? "I have learned. . .that the head does not hear anything until the heart has listened, and what the heart knows today the head will understand tomorrow."

Dina Ticas

3/21/2016 02:24:32 am

I absolutely love this quote. Thank you. And thank you for introducing me to Rabbityness. I latched on to the themes of death/grief/celebration of life. Perhaps that wasn't the intended goal but I found myself soothed by the thought. I'm also a few months into grieving the death of my dad, so there's that.

Rosie Pova

3/21/2016 02:23:36 pm

Very important to be reminded to include those elements in our stories so they get a beating heart that shines.

Janie Reinart

3/24/2016 06:11:06 pm

I agree Rosie. I want to write that way too!

Since there was no button to reply to Dina, I am including a note here. Dina, I sent you a PM.

LuAnn Kern

3/21/2016 04:06:58 pm

Thanks for introducing me to these books. I loved Rabbityness, reminds me of Badger's Parting Gift. And I Am Otter is now in a dead heat for my all-time favorite, Diva V. Poe!

Janie Reinart

3/24/2016 06:11:57 pm

Thank you LuAnn. I will check out those titles.

Cindy Jolley

3/23/2016 02:44:45 pm

Thanks, Janie, for this list. You have challenged me to consider what it is about a book that makes me love it and to think about that as I write.

Janie Reinart

3/24/2016 06:18:41 pm

Cindy, isn't it amazing how everyone has different tastes. I end up buying copies of the books I really love.

Kelly Rice Schmitt

3/23/2016 10:31:08 pm

Janie,

I really enjoyed this post and your selections. It's the little details and unexpected wonderful bits of real life imperfections that make the heart twinge. Thank you for these mentor texts to help inspire us!

Janie Reinart

3/24/2016 06:19:22 pm

Thanks. Kelly. So many books. So little time.

Lauri Meyers

3/25/2016 08:58:20 pm

I finally picked these up from the library, and you are so right on the parts that make your heart stop:)

Janie Reinart

3/29/2016 11:25:38 am

Lauri so happy you enjoyed these books too!

Susie Sawyer link

3/27/2016 06:47:13 pm

yes - all of these! Also, a true emotion or a surprise ending. Thank you!

Janie Reinart

3/29/2016 11:26:28 am

Love those surprise endings, Susie!

Lynne Marie link

3/29/2016 05:22:46 pm

What a great resource!

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