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Revealing ReFoReMo: Romelle Broas Researches Methodically

6/2/2015

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by Romelle Broas

I have to admit I've never really understood how to use mentor texts until the ReFoReMo challenge. I used to just read a book, take mental notes of the books I love, and put it in my special stack for inspiration. That's where it ended. I had a stack of books staring me in the face saying, "now what?"

The author-educators who guest-blogged during the ReFoReMo event helped me understand HOW to use picture books as mentor texts. They were all fabulous, but below are some of the posts that stood out to me:


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Tara Lazar- Tara discussed the importance of hooking a reader with COVER, TITLE, SUBJECT MATTER, and PLOT TWISTS. By asking myself, "What draws me to a book?" I can pinpoint what makes it so attractive and engaging.

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Marcie Colleen- Marcie shared books that inspired MOOD, STYLE, THEME, and PLOT ARC while creating her upcoming stories. Now, when I find a book I love, I draft a story that carries out the same style and tone to help me develop the skill.

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Susanna Leonard Hill- Susanna helped me to look at elements of picture books at a deeper level. Sure, many of the books have them, but which one makes a book stand out and why? Susanna's post inspired me to write down specifics and look for examples in the text that support the lovely LANGUAGE, lovable CHARACTER, or satisfying ENDING.

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Mentor texts give me an idea on how to enhance my picture book writing. It's one thing to know what I need in my story; it's another to know HOW to do it.

Throughout the ReFoReMo challenge, I collected questions from the ReFoReMo author-educators and formed some of my own to help me with my research.  As a result, I created my own worksheet that I fill out whenever I find a picture book I LOVE.

Some people like to read mentor texts and let them absorb organically. I'm more technical, and need to analyze books in writing to help me process it better.

Going through my questions and writing them out as an exercise was an epiphany for me. By citing specific examples from the book like what makes me want to read the book over again or what made me fall in love with the character was a revelation. Mentor texts finally make sense to me.

With the information I gathered, I am now able to write my stories with purpose and direction. I am excited about my revisions and turning my ordinary manuscripts into something extraordinary!

I hope my worksheet inspires you, too. Feel free to revise it according to your preference. Happy researching!

THANK YOU Carrie Charley Brown and ReFoReMo participants!


Thank YOU, Romelle! Your worksheet is GREAT!
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Romelle Broas is a dental hygienist by day, writer by night, and mother all the time. She is the author of several eBooks. Her latest release, RUNNING BOY, is published by MeeGeenius. Romelle also writes nonfiction under the name of Romelle Guittap. Her writing has been featured in FACES, Boys' Quest, Stories for Children, and Skipping Stone. You can find her blogging about her journey to becoming a picture book writer and meandering around in the kidlit community.

42 Comments
Kaye Baillie
6/1/2015 10:01:17 pm

And the awesome generosity and wonderful sharing continues - thank you Carrie and Tara for showing us these terrific posts and I love the worksheet.

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Carrie Charley Brown
6/1/2015 11:49:39 pm

Thanks, Kaye. Romelle developed an amazing worksheet for sure! :) Like you, I am so thankful for the ReFoReMo author-educators, and Romelle did a great job of reminding us of Tara, Marcie, and Susanna's posts. Thanks for reading! :)

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 04:53:53 am

Kaye, glad you love the worksheet!

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Manju Howard link
6/2/2015 12:21:52 am

Hi, Romelle. I like how you combined the main points of some author-educators' posts to create your own worksheet. I've taken a computer file approach to compiling notes. These lists (on paper or computer) really do help solve problems in creating perfect picture books.

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 04:55:50 am

Hi Manju, The writing community is wonderful! We all can benefit from each other by sharing resources.

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Juliann (Juli) Caveny link
6/2/2015 01:47:18 am

Love your worksheet, Romelle! There is so much to learn from good mentor text. This sheet covers it all! Thanks so much for sharing with us!

One thing I also like to include when I'm analyzing PB text are the page numbers. I find it interesting where (in the 32 page flow) the conflict is introduced, a subplot comes into play, the climax is apparent, and how/when the artist is given liberty to take a two page (or more) break from text--almost like musical interlude in a movie. By keeping track of the page numbers, I'm also consciously tracking the pacing of the story. (Or it could be I'm a bit OCD!)

Best of luck on your writing!

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 04:57:45 am

Ha-ha! OCD does have its advantages! That is a great tip, Juliann. Pacing is so important. I like to type out the text in full too see the pacing as you do.

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Tina Cho link
6/2/2015 02:12:04 am

Awesome worksheet, Romelle! Thanks so much for sharing!

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 05:00:06 am

You're welcome! I get so much from this writing community that I'm glad I can contribute something.

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Darshana Khiani link
6/2/2015 02:19:13 am

Great worksheet! Thanks Romelle!

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Gabriele
6/2/2015 03:11:24 am

Thank you for the inspiration -- and the awesome worksheet!

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 12:11:29 pm

Hi Gabriele, thank you for your kind words!

Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 05:00:59 am

Glad you like it, Darshana!

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Vivian Kirkfield link
6/2/2015 04:12:38 am

Howdy Romelle! A million thanks for this incredible mentor text worksheet...you are an angel to share it with us. ;)
And a big thank you for highlighting those special ReFoReMo posts...I will reread them.

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 12:10:05 pm

I'm always learning from the likes of you, Vivian, that I'm happy to be able to contribute in some way.

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Sandy Perlic
6/2/2015 04:14:06 am

Romelle, this is a wonderful way to capture the key points of a mentor text in order to really absorb why it works. Thanks for sharing!

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 12:08:23 pm

There was so much to learn from this month-long event that it helps to jot down notes along the way. Thanks for stopping by Sandy.

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Penny Parker Klostermann link
6/2/2015 04:22:57 am

Thanks, Romelle! Great tool!

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Jennifer Cole Judd link
6/2/2015 04:46:35 am

Wow, Romelle! Love this worksheet. You're amazing! :) Great inspiration! Thanks so much for sharing!

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 05:45:23 pm

No, Jennifer, YOU'RE amazing! ;)

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Jilanne Hoffmann
6/2/2015 05:30:18 am

I, too, am an analyzer. But I tend not to be very organized, scattering my analyses from notebook to notebook. This worksheet solves that problem, keeping all the data in one place. I think I'll make a folder filled with these sheets. Thanks for giving us a great tool to use!

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Romelle Broas link
6/2/2015 05:46:56 pm

Good idea, Jilanne. I need to start putting mine in a binder too.

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Kirsti Call
6/2/2015 05:44:49 am

I love the worksheet Romelle! What a great way to get at the heart of why a PB is a good mentor text! ReFoReMo just keeps on giving, Carrie!

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Romelle Broas link
6/4/2015 09:24:02 am

You summed it up well, Kristi: getting to the heart of why a PB is a good mentor text!

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Keila Dawson link
6/2/2015 05:49:49 am

Thanks for such an insightful post. I love worksheets, thanks for sharing yours Romelle!

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Leslie Goodman link
6/2/2015 07:46:44 am

I LOVE the Mentor Text worksheet. What a wonderful gift you have given us. When I find a mentor text I am drawn to, I always type it out. and include page numbers so I can analyze the action of the story. Sometimes I storyboard my mentor texts. I'm very visual, so this helps a lot. Thanks for a great post!

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Romelle Broas link
6/4/2015 09:27:34 am

Creating a story board is helpful. It helps to also type out the entire book and read it without the pictures.

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Laura Renauld
6/2/2015 10:33:03 am

Like you, I didn't have a great road map for reading a mentor text. Now, thanks to your synthesis of all the great posts, I do! Thank you for sharing your terrific worksheet. I'm off to make copies :)

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maria gianferrari link
6/2/2015 10:48:10 am

Very helpful worksheet, Romelle--thanks for sharing it!

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Nancy Ramsey
6/2/2015 04:08:19 pm

Looking forward to using the mentor text evaluation worksheet- Thanks very much for sharing it with us!

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jan annino link
6/3/2015 12:47:31 am

Appreciations for this nourishing post.
A visit to
The Classroom Bookshelf
lassroombookshelf.blogspot.com/search?updated-min=2015-01-01T00:00:00-05:00&updated-max=2016-01-01T00:00:00-05:00&max-results=23
It may also enlarge your tool box, just as this has done for mine,
if that resource hasn't been shared yet. The post linked to above, by Katie Cunningham is especially, liquidly, lovely.

More appreciations.

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jan annino
6/3/2015 12:49:06 am

Classroombookshelf.blogspot.com/search?updated-min=2015-01-01T00:00:00-05:00&updated-max=2016-01-01T00:00:00-05:00&max-results=23

(thanks for this added opportunity - the "C" was snipped, above!

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Suzy Leopold
6/3/2015 03:39:08 am

The Kid Lit Community continues to amaze me with talent and generosity. Thank you for sharing your mentor text writing worksheet, Romelle. As an educator and a writer your creation is now added to my writing tool box. I even printed several copies already. Hugs.

And more hugs for you, Carrie, as you continue to *carry on* with posts that continue to inspire.

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Romelle Broas link
6/4/2015 09:29:05 am

Glad you found the worksheet useful, Suzy! Hugs right back to you!

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Kristi Veitenheimer link
6/3/2015 05:38:49 am

Thanks so much for the worksheet! It's extremely helpful!

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Lauri Meyers link
6/3/2015 07:27:50 am

OOHH! This is good Romelle! I feel just like you. I was reading A LOT, but until ReFoReMo I didn't realize I wasn't reading with enough depth or focus. I have a little booklet designed for children called the Brilliant Reader Book Log that I started using to help capture some of those more detailed points. But your worksheet is way better:) Thank you!

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Romelle Broas link
6/4/2015 09:32:13 am

I remember you mention about the Reader Book Log. I feel better, too, knowing that I wasn't alone in not knowing how to use mentor text to its fullest.

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Rene` Diane Aube
6/3/2015 02:39:21 pm

Thank you, Tara and Romelle! It's nice to know I'm not alone when it comes to learning to understand mentor texts. I found myself reading tons and eventually becoming sort of zombieized *is that a word?* or something, feeling like I wasn't absorbing enough/correctly. I love the worksheet it is going to be a great help and resource :)

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Romelle Broas link
6/4/2015 09:33:56 am

Lol. We are creative writers, Rene so in my book, zombieized IS a word.

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janet smart link
6/20/2015 05:08:59 am

Thanks for the worksheet download. Don't know if it will work or not, but I might also use it to analyze my own picture book manuscripts - to see what is missing and what I may be doing wrong.

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PatHaap
2/2/2016 07:58:43 am

Very helpful post - and thanks for the worksheet!

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Anne
2/2/2016 09:16:21 am

Thank you for making your worksheet available, Romelle. I've just joined ReFoReMo and am thrilled about the help here.

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